Very nicely done. You've got the characters down perfectly. I could hear them speaking and see it happening. I really loved this pairing.

A'ight, so I LOVED this story!

I really like your style of writing.

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“Watch your back Leo. She’s feisty.” With that C.J. turned the corner and disappeared. What did she mean by that? The girl looked like she had just come from church.
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I laughed SO hard at that part! Oh my gosh, I think that may have been my favorite part of this entire story! (which is saying something, because like I said before: I love this entire story)

You NEED to write more, because I am having a major McBeth (haha!) withdrawel. (I think that's how you spell that dumb word.)

...pretty please?

--Misha