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| Hatake Sienna 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseAw, this was sad and hapy/made me want to cry and jump for joy all at the same time. Nice work ^-^ |
| kitsunegal-chan 2007-03-12 ch 2, | abusehaha that was so well written! Great! I loved the restraint that he showed and when it finally cracked, it made the whole thing better! here, have a cookie! |
| Miskcat 2006-09-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is really lovely! The very first fanfic I ever thought about was "What if Roy and Winry...?" I've always thought this was a relationship that should be explored, being vastly more complex than other relationships in this series. Well done! Love the angst, and the fulfillment. |
| Silent Kunoichi aka. Fiona 2006-07-26 ch 2, | abuseThis fic was great. I fully agree on what you said pertaining to the other couples such as Sess/Rin and Kaka/Saku. Roy and Winry need more lovin'. |
| Serenity05 2006-07-08 ch 2, | abuseWhoa hello! I LOVELOVELOVE the RoyXWinry pairing a lot! Woo hoo go you! At least someone agrees with me that they make a GREAT couple! I mean he killed her parents because he was ordered too but yet she can't help but fall in love with him? It's a perfect love story I tell ya! PERFECT! |
| AGENT KITS 2006-07-02 ch 2, | abuseI think you just turned me into a RoyxWinry fan. I read the uncensored version, and now I think I'm in love with that pairing. The last line was priceless. |
| Pirate Shinju 2006-07-01 ch 2, | abuseIf it makes you feel any better, this is the first Fullmetal Alchemist fanfic I have ever read and the pairing I chose was Roy and Winry... -^__^- |
| Happy-Spirit 2006-06-23 ch 1, | abuseI read both versions of chapter two,The adult version is really good |
| pitabread 2006-06-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved it! hehe... "Ed would be so pissed if he knew." LMAO! *much roflling ensues* OMG, I never thought of these two together, but it totally makes sense :) LOVE IT! |
| Rissell C 2006-06-16 ch 2, | abuseAh, this is so good. This definitely deserves more comments :D. |
| Rissell C 2006-06-16 ch 1, | abuseOh, the little tears in my eyes. How lovely. On to chapter 2 :) |
| Miss Soupy 2006-05-28 ch 2, | abusewell i love RoyWin as well, so you are not alone! This was a great fic! very well written I never really thought about how Winry's life isn't all that equivalent. She did lose a lot of people that were important to her, so she definitely needs something really good to happen in return. Yay for the Roy being what she needs!! |
| Anya-06 2006-05-24 ch 2, | abusewow, its getting hot in her (and it really was getting hot while i was reading this chapter in the college library). Girl it had been so long since i read a good Roy/Win story. I love the way you wrote each characters feelings (love, fear, sadness, happiness) you really manage really well without mixing them. Riza marrying Havoc a complete irony but posible. I am a fan of Royai and of Ed/wins but i completly agree with you that Roy/Win are the best couple. Please update soon! |
| SpiritualEnergy 2006-05-23 ch 2, | abuseLol, very true, Roy. Aw, I read it, Ash! And I loved it! I loved how you described their feelings - you rock at that. Lol, I thought it was funny how Winry was at first mumbling Ed's name, and then she was calling Roy! Whoo, anyone hot in here? Lol, anyways, I loved this! Excellent job! See ya Thursday! |
| SpiritualEnergy 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseWhew, saw this this morning, though didn't have enough time to review :( school keeps me from the anime...lol, anyways, I loved this! Especially the angst. Oh, the wonderful, wonderful angst! ^^ I liked how she forgave him. When she said she was only going to say it once, I was like "OH CRAP! WHAT IS IT!?" then when it actually said it, I felt like such a ditz for not realizing ^^ lol. Heehee, I loved it! |