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Hatake Sienna
2007-08-28
ch 1,
abuseAw, this was sad and hapy/made me want to cry and jump for joy all at the same time. Nice work ^-^
kitsunegal-chan
2007-03-12
ch 2,
abusehaha that was so well written! Great! I loved the restraint that he showed and when it finally cracked, it made the whole thing better! here, have a cookie!
Miskcat
2006-09-05
ch 1,
abuseThis is really lovely! The very first fanfic I ever thought about was "What if Roy and Winry...?" I've always thought this was a relationship that should be explored, being vastly more complex than other relationships in this series. Well done! Love the angst, and the fulfillment.
Silent Kunoichi aka. Fiona
2006-07-26
ch 2,
abuseThis fic was great. I fully agree on what you said pertaining to the other couples such as Sess/Rin and Kaka/Saku. Roy and Winry need more lovin'.
Serenity05
2006-07-08
ch 2,
abuseWhoa hello! I LOVELOVELOVE the RoyXWinry pairing a lot! Woo hoo go you! At least someone agrees with me that they make a GREAT couple! I mean he killed her parents because he was ordered too but yet she can't help but fall in love with him? It's a perfect love story I tell ya! PERFECT!
AGENT KITS
2006-07-02
ch 2,
abuseI think you just turned me into a RoyxWinry fan. I read the uncensored version, and now I think I'm in love with that pairing. The last line was priceless.
Pirate Shinju
2006-07-01
ch 2,
abuseIf it makes you feel any better, this is the first Fullmetal Alchemist fanfic I have ever read and the pairing I chose was Roy and Winry... -^__^-
Happy-Spirit
2006-06-23
ch 1,
abuseI read both versions of chapter two,The adult version is really good
pitabread
2006-06-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseI loved it! hehe... "Ed would be so pissed if he knew." LMAO! *much roflling ensues* OMG, I never thought of these two together, but it totally makes sense :) LOVE IT!
Rissell C
2006-06-16
ch 2,
abuseAh, this is so good. This definitely deserves more comments :D.
Rissell C
2006-06-16
ch 1,
abuseOh, the little tears in my eyes. How lovely. On to chapter 2 :)
Miss Soupy
2006-05-28
ch 2,
abusewell i love RoyWin as well, so you are not alone! This was a great fic! very well written
I never really thought about how Winry's life isn't all that equivalent. She did lose a lot of people that were important to her, so she definitely needs something really good to happen in return. Yay for the Roy being what she needs!!
Anya-06
2006-05-24
ch 2,
abusewow, its getting hot in her (and it really was getting hot while i was reading this chapter in the college library). Girl it had been so long since i read a good Roy/Win story. I love the way you wrote each characters feelings (love, fear, sadness, happiness) you really manage really well without mixing them.

Riza marrying Havoc a complete irony but posible.

I am a fan of Royai and of Ed/wins but i completly agree with you that Roy/Win are the best couple.

Please update soon!
SpiritualEnergy
2006-05-23
ch 2,
abuseLol, very true, Roy. Aw, I read it, Ash! And I loved it! I loved how you described their feelings - you rock at that. Lol, I thought it was funny how Winry was at first mumbling Ed's name, and then she was calling Roy! Whoo, anyone hot in here? Lol, anyways, I loved this! Excellent job!

See ya Thursday!
SpiritualEnergy
2006-04-06
ch 1,
abuseWhew, saw this this morning, though didn't have enough time to review :( school keeps me from the anime...lol, anyways, I loved this! Especially the angst. Oh, the wonderful, wonderful angst! ^^ I liked how she forgave him. When she said she was only going to say it once, I was like "OH CRAP! WHAT IS IT!?" then when it actually said it, I felt like such a ditz for not realizing ^^ lol.

Heehee, I loved it!
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