 mischiefmagnet 2009-03-24 . chapter 1This is my new favorite pairing (yeah, I'm a little behind the times) and I really enjoyed this story. As a whole piece, it has a completeness that is very satisfying, and the last line of the second chapter was indeed hilarious.
I still haven't stopped wondering why nobody seems to write Roy/Winry. It may not be the easiest thing in the world, but there's so much delicious angst and ready-made drama that it seems like quite a fan fictional treasure trove to me! Maybe it just seems too easy to write it badly? I think Roy/Winry written badly could be very... bad. But still... I don't know. I guess I'll never understand it.
I loved the way you wrote both Roy and Winry, and how you left the story open-ended enough to allow them at least the possibility of happiness. Very cathartic, and also very nicely written. |
 Hatake Sienna 2007-08-28 . chapter 1Aw, this was sad and hapy/made me want to cry and jump for joy all at the same time. Nice work ^-^ |
 kitsunegal-chan 2007-03-12 . chapter 2haha that was so well written! Great! I loved the restraint that he showed and when it finally cracked, it made the whole thing better! here, have a cookie! |
 Miskcat 2006-09-05 . chapter 1This is really lovely! The very first fanfic I ever thought about was "What if Roy and Winry...?" I've always thought this was a relationship that should be explored, being vastly more complex than other relationships in this series. Well done! Love the angst, and the fulfillment. |
 Silent Kunoichi aka. Fiona 2006-07-26 . chapter 2This fic was great. I fully agree on what you said pertaining to the other couples such as Sess/Rin and Kaka/Saku. Roy and Winry need more lovin'. |
 Serenity05 2006-07-08 . chapter 2Whoa hello! I LOVELOVELOVE the RoyXWinry pairing a lot! Woo hoo go you! At least someone agrees with me that they make a GREAT couple! I mean he killed her parents because he was ordered too but yet she can't help but fall in love with him? It's a perfect love story I tell ya! PERFECT! |
 kitsuneasika 2006-07-02 . chapter 2I think you just turned me into a RoyxWinry fan. I read the uncensored version, and now I think I'm in love with that pairing. The last line was priceless. |
 Pirate Shinju 2006-07-01 . chapter 2If it makes you feel any better, this is the first Fullmetal Alchemist fanfic I have ever read and the pairing I chose was Roy and Winry... -^__^- |
 Kick-It-Aus Style-Mal's 2006-06-23 . chapter 1I read both versions of chapter two,The adult version is really good |
 pitabread 2006-06-19 . chapter 1 I loved it! hehe... "Ed would be so pissed if he knew." LMAO! *much roflling ensues* OMG, I never thought of these two together, but it totally makes sense :) LOVE IT! |
 Rissell C 2006-06-16 . chapter 2Ah, this is so good. This definitely deserves more comments :D. |
 Rissell C 2006-06-16 . chapter 1Oh, the little tears in my eyes. How lovely. On to chapter 2 :) |
 Miss Soupy 2006-05-28 . chapter 2well i love RoyWin as well, so you are not alone! This was a great fic! very well written
I never really thought about how Winry's life isn't all that equivalent. She did lose a lot of people that were important to her, so she definitely needs something really good to happen in return. Yay for the Roy being what she needs!! |
 Anya-06 2006-05-24 . chapter 2wow, its getting hot in her (and it really was getting hot while i was reading this chapter in the college library). Girl it had been so long since i read a good Roy/Win story. I love the way you wrote each characters feelings (love, fear, sadness, happiness) you really manage really well without mixing them.
Riza marrying Havoc a complete irony but posible.
I am a fan of Royai and of Ed/wins but i completly agree with you that Roy/Win are the best couple.
Please update soon! |
 SpiritualEnergy 2006-05-23 . chapter 2Lol, very true, Roy. Aw, I read it, Ash! And I loved it! I loved how you described their feelings - you rock at that. Lol, I thought it was funny how Winry was at first mumbling Ed's name, and then she was calling Roy! Whoo, anyone hot in here? Lol, anyways, I loved this! Excellent job!
See ya Thursday! |