Hm, it never occurred to me to wonder what Mwu might be feeling fighting with Kira. An interesting and enjoyable read.

*sighs* that was way too cute.

hmm, nice to know he trusts her enough to temper around with his (precious) machine _

I think you've captured their working relationship quite well. him being a bit doubtful at first. but I esp love the analogy between the human and machanical components of the ship. It says a lot about her feelings towards being captain.

nice job. looking forward to more from you! _

Awe! Loved how she jumped in and helped him fix his MS That was cute.

Nice…very nice indeed. I like how you phrased everything. Your style of writing has this thing that makes people want to read what you wrote. And, aw, mwu, written just the way he was in the series…his idiosyncratic disposition-one second we see him fooling around, then he gets serious the next-is just so adorable. And, of course, there’s murrue, whose personality-at least in my opinion-you captured quite well.

I don’t get to read a lot of mwu/murrue fics, but I know a good read when I see one, and yours is one helluva read. Hope I can see more of your writings. Anyway, ‘til I get a lot more spare time. Cheers.

AWW! that was soo awsome! I love this story , very well written and sweet.I hope you update soon!

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Aww. I liked that, I'm not that into Mwu, Murrue fics but I liked that one, it seemed kind of simple, but expressive at the same time, does that make sense?

Anyway, it was good and I enjoyed reading it.

Great job! Very well written. :)

"And mind your manners, as circumstances may require. And never set the cat on fire!"

Nice, perceptive little story that catches the pair of them beautifully.

Also nice to find someone else who knows that filk!

Excellent work. I especially loved the ending. So cute. Keep up the great work, and hope to see more soon.