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| Enelya Cuthlion 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abuseHey, it's not bad. I wasn't expecting big thing because it's a Peter thing, but it's not bad. I love your ivy/wall analogy. Nice. And your last line was brilliant. You know how I get about good final lines, and that's one of the best I've read in a while. Cheers, EC |
| Amberhawk 2006-04-13 ch 1, | abuseWAH!I ALMOST CRIED WHEN I READ THIS!Dang PMS...But dude,you have some amd skillz!This ROCKED OUT LOUD!^_^ |
| angelofplottwists 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseThank you for writing a story about Peter that does not depict him as a right bastard! He's probably my favourite character (He's so complex! So many layers - you could call him the Onion Marauder too...) and I see him simplified too often as evil from the get-go. And the ivy image was excellent. Full marks! |
| evalanis 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseWow... *Son becomes almost worhsipful* You tackled Peter! Not many people tackle Peter! And yet you did it well... I like this one... Well done, Stin. I really like how you describe his reliance on others, very nice ivy-wall analogy. Worshipful as always, Son |