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Reviews For: The Ivy Marauder

Enelya Cuthlion
2006-04-18
ch 1,
abuseHey, it's not bad. I wasn't expecting big thing because it's a Peter thing, but it's not bad. I love your ivy/wall analogy. Nice. And your last line was brilliant. You know how I get about good final lines, and that's one of the best I've read in a while.

Cheers,

EC
Amberhawk
2006-04-13
ch 1,
abuseWAH!I ALMOST CRIED WHEN I READ THIS!Dang PMS...But dude,you have some amd skillz!This ROCKED OUT LOUD!^_^
angelofplottwists
2006-04-06
ch 1,
abuseThank you for writing a story about Peter that does not depict him as a right bastard! He's probably my favourite character (He's so complex! So many layers - you could call him the Onion Marauder too...) and I see him simplified too often as evil from the get-go.

And the ivy image was excellent. Full marks!
evalanis
2006-04-06
ch 1,
abuseWow... *Son becomes almost worhsipful* You tackled Peter! Not many people tackle Peter! And yet you did it well... I like this one... Well done, Stin. I really like how you describe his reliance on others, very nice ivy-wall analogy.

Worshipful as always,
Son
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