 that's the way love goes 2006-08-19 . chapter 21I'm glad everything worked out and I really liked this story. |
 sparkle587 2006-08-19 . chapter 21I wanted to cry when I saw Complete! A wonderful ending to a wonderful story. I'm going to miss all these people I've gotten to know through your wonderful story telling. Great job!
~felicia |
 luvluv 2006-08-18 . chapter 21Wow! I loved the way you named the last chapter title "Let That Be Enough" a fitting end to a wonder journey. On with the review...A year later they are all at the house together as a family, the way it was meant to be. Thomas and Ellie together and Ellie adopted LT as her legal son, hopefully they will get married when they are a little older.
Marco and Rory are still grown stronger in their relationship and still very much in love. Marco realizing that his father was waiting for him to leave before he passed away not wanting him to have to go through what he did with his mother. He dealt with it with Rory by his side. He has the family that he's been looking for...the children running around having fun and his best friends and now family are all together for the first time in a year, yeah! he's lucky alright.
Remy and Nate are too cute and them wanting to be lawyers when they graduate is an inspiration to itself...this comimg from the Kelly saga. At least they are still growing stronger in their love as time goes by.
Lindsey and Theresa...boy what these two have gone through. Lindsey jailed for statutory rape and Theresa with here many failed relationships and pregnancies but through it all they found love in each other. I'm glad that he got his GED and Theresa took a year off to be with him...this must be love. I hate to admit it...Theresa did grow on me from about Chapter 15 until present. I'm glad that Lindsey's love for her made in turn from the witch she was into this wonderful person that you would be proud to call friend.
Andrew and Jesse are still together and so in love. I'm impressed by his wanting to make it own his own in college without the assistance of his boyfriend's money, his pride won't let him, good for him.
I loved this story from the very beginning. What a journey we've been on. I hope that you will write more. You are fantatic at what you do...One more time for the road...As Always, Black Rose Is Definitely On Fire. |
 luvluv 2006-08-18 . chapter 20Remy and Nate, who would have thought that, not me, that's for sure. Remy even wrote a letter to culprits who put him there, thanking them for they did by putting him there. That's when he met Remy in there and thinks starting escalating from there. Hopefully this is true love and finally they both can get past all the pain that Kelly had caused them. From there they will heal together as a couple...at least they both seem happy...I know it will work out.
Andrew has been by Jesse's side throughout the whole ordeal since Jesse's accident...never leaving his side and praying that he will return to him soon. Though Jesse can't speak to him, he can truly hear him trying to pull him from that dark abyss that he's stuck in. Finally he awakens and sees Andrew by his side, realizing that he is not alone and tells Andre that he loves him too, yeah!
I can't believe that Sarah and her father had the audacity to show up at Thomas' house and drop the baby off like a sack of potatoes. Thank God for Ellie and loving him unconditionally. Thomas even made up with Lindsey and they can truly start their friendship over again.
Poor Marco losing his father like that, even after the doctor said that he would be well enough to go home in a week or two. I'm glad that they made up and he tells Marco that he's known he was gay from the beginning and that he still loved him, very touching and emotional for me because he accepted the fact that Marco was gay and with Rory, whom he liked, big step for his father.
It seems that everyone is getting what their heart desires. This chapter is off the chain (OTC). Off for my final review. As Always, Black Rose Is Definitely On Fire. |
 luvluv 2006-08-18 . chapter 19I see that Thomas' father didn't die, I'm glad though...it could have been bad for him. There seems to be some perverted type of respect for Thomas now...I don't think they will ever be a normal father and son.
Maroc is doing a little better (and crew are alright for the exception of Jesse...still hasn't awaken yet. I pray that he will be alright...got to be.
When Thomas' showed up for Ellie, I was so thrilled and then Craig shows up and Nate, no matter what he says, still has some feeings left for Craig. The both said hurtful things to each other...At least they tried to separate as mabybe, possibly friends.
That druken driver is Marco's father...OMG! I was way off. Anyhow, This chapter is OTC. As Always, Black Rose Is Definitely On Fire. |
 luvluv 2006-08-18 . chapter 18OMG! I can't believe all the drams that was going on in this chapter. From Marco, Jesse, Gracie and Ellie all going back to Canada, to Tyler, Theresa, Andrew and Rory intervention with Nate and his ending up at a rehab clinic, his not liking it much but it will help him in the long run, to the car crash with a druken driver with Marco and company, and finally to the confortation between Thomas and his father...the gun going off causing Thomas to shoot him...I'm not saying that his father deserved to be shot but he did kick the crap out of his Thomas...at least Thomas stood up for himself...it was self-defense. I'm wondering who died, I'm guessing maybe the druken driver, all I know is, I live for DRAMA! DRAMA! DRAMA! Again, this chapter...Wow! what can I say, it's one of the most entertaining chapters yet. Off to read the next chapter. As Always, Black Rose Is Definitely On Fire. |
 luvluv 2006-08-18 . chapter 17I'm glad that Theresa talked Remy into getting help with his eating disorder. He's even thankful for Theresa for her help because he's thankful that he's got another chance at life in general...possibly find love again, at least she's good for something...she's growing on me. I guess love can change a person.
Thomas is right about what he told Ellie. It is too soon for them to be together because she would be on the rebound. He needs time to heal from that disasterious relationship with Theresa first.
I see where Marco needs time to spiritually heal within himself where it comes to his relationship with Rory. Thinking back over his relationships and how things fell apart, he just needs this time to breathe.
Lindsey was feeling a little out of sorts because he thinks everyone has abandoned him until he sees Theresa walk in and now he knows that she loves him and will never leave him.
Thomas and Nate are finally back to being best friends again. I'm glad they made up. Their friendship was too precious to lose, glad they came to their senses.
Jessie just found out that Alex and he were brothers and now he's wondering if Andrew is only with him because he looks like him. That fleeting kiss and intertwining of their fingers is a bittersweet memory that will play in my memory as I watched Jesse said goodbye to Andrew.
This chapter is fantastic. I've got to read more...on to review the next chapter. |
 emphatic loser 2006-08-18 . chapter 21 Id say that was the perfect ending. Im kidna speechless again but attempting to ramble it out.
I loved it. You got true talent, hun, and I love your writing. This story was amazing too and really moving, the end was seriously perfect, Im not disappointed at all...I was worried Id miss it too much to like it but I think I'll survive =] the end message was just like...emotional blow. In a good way.
Thanks for writing such a great...ness.
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 luvluv 2006-08-18 . chapter 16Hey, I know it's been a while but here I am. On with the review. I think that Nate is going to have to get help he's getting out of control and if Tyler can't help him some needs to do it. It's kind of refreshing seeing how he and Theresa has changed alot since the beginning of their entrance into this story.
I can't believe that Andrew share one of his intermost secrets with Ellie...maybe she can help him come to grips with his cutting.
I was so afraid that Thomas and Nate were going to get into a fight over Theresa (of all people) and her honor. I'm glad she fessed up to Nate and told him what she did.
Yeah, I have to say that Marco is the right person for Rory...glad that they are together. It was touching and very emotional to see Rory go to the gravesite of Rex (his first love) and tell him about Marco and how he loves him. When he kiss that tombstone, it was closure, I guess this was his way of letting go and going on with the future.
I really loved this chapter. I'm off to review the next one. |
 sparkle587 2006-08-13 . chapter 20I'm so sad but excited about the epilogue. I love this story and I'm so sad that both of you stories are coming close to the end I'll miss you and your writing so much!
~felicia |
 emphatic loser 2006-08-13 . chapter 20 Youre my hero |
 that's the way love goes 2006-08-13 . chapter 20I knew marco's dad was going to be the one to die and i'm glad jesse woke up. |
 sparkle587 2006-08-11 . chapter 19I'm back! I have missed your stories so much. I loved all the new cahpters and I'm sad this one is coming close to its end.
~felicia |
 that's the way love goes 2006-08-10 . chapter 19either jesse or marco's father are the only people who I can think of who could die. I'm shocked nate actually didn't go psycho crazy at seeing craig, I would have. add soon |
 emphatic loser 2006-08-09 . chapter 19 OMGYAY.
I feel all squishy inside. Because so much is happy. But theres that foreshadowing someones gonna die. And considering theres only one person close to dying and two chapters left...it seems obvious. But that makes me ana cry. Oh god, I feel it coming on. I hope its not him. I reallyreallyreallydont want it to be. I couldn't handle it. I want it to be Theresa or someone I don't like too much, though she is better.
But no one whose happy. This is the first mostly happy chapter. It was actualyl really happy, I was suprised. Made me all fuzzy!
So many happy couples, Nate wasnt as bitter, people were okayish, Andrew took a big step...
I really dont care about Marco getting hit by his dad though, I was like 'oh thats interesting!' because it was a nice little thing but I just had to remind myself to comment abou that cause I was too busy forgetting abou that and bouncing in squeeness for rory and marco xDD And of course thomas and ellie =] And Andrew being all cutesy.
But see if Jesse dies, Andrew would die too. Which would be two. You said one died. Why cant the cab driver count??
So that kinda makes me think. Is Jesse gonna be okay but before he wasnt so Andrew offs himself anyways? Or is someone else gonna die alltogether? I really dont know.
But I love it. =]
Its my crack. And my antidrug. LMAO.
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