Haha... that was too adorable. Lol I'm like reading all your fics.

very cute

Cute - I like the whole magnet thing.

wow! you did i a great job portraying what their relationship would be like! great job.

Oh, squee!

Lovely and perfect. I am violently opposed to Jack/Chloe fluff because I don't think it's feasible, and I don't think that they could ever have "romance," even though I'm a 'shipper. If that makes sense.

Anyway, point being, this was a bee-yoo-ti-ful take on a lighthearted Jack Chloe, done very in-character... probably because it was centered around CTU. In any event, lovely, and so very squee-worthy. It's one of my favorite, if not THE favorite Jack/Chloes.

yeah great chapter you should really make a squeal with Chloe Pov.

Ahem. Sorry my last review was so...um...scatter-brainy...or something like that. Er, i just loved it. Like, really loved it. If you hadn't guessed. And I like this a lot too. The ending is incredibly cute.

I really enjoyed the insight to Jack's thoughts about his relationship with chloe. I love how you manage to make them work as a couple without changing their characters.

You have out done yourself with this fic. I was so excited at work today to see that you posted anther story. I am so glad that I opened it up! You have captured Chloe/Jack above and beyond how I pictured them. This is the BEST portrayal of these two characters. They are so opposite and yet click so well. I wish you would write more along with this story line. You just captured them so well.

Very well done! Good job!

I likey. I likey a lot. Very cute, and sounds like what they would actually be like.
One thing, (you know me and the whole attempt at grammer thing) its smoothly not smoothing.

I really enjoyed that. Jack and Chloe are two of my favorite characters, you def write some more even though you said this was finished