 darklover 2009-11-25 . chapter 1Loved it. |
 kaibasgirlx 2009-02-16 . chapter 1You know, from the title and summary, I was thinking this fic would be about something completely different. And I was expecting it to be HitsuMatsu. But as much as I hate those two as a pairing, it was extremely hard to NOT want to just take a peek and see what this fic was all about.
Wow, this was completely the opposite of what was implied. How sneaky XD
Anyway, I rather enjoyed this ^^ I like how you write the relationship between Hitsugaya and Matsumoto. They sound like siblings when they argue, and I always imagined Matsumoto to be a sort of older sister figure to Hitsugaya. Not in the sense of needing guidance, but in the sense of family relations.
Again, really well-written ^^
~Téa |
 Yukino-chan 2008-09-24 . chapter 1 lol...1nite stand indeed! |
 AbaraiSuzuka 2008-05-21 . chapter 1Yet another AWESOME oneshot :D
Your writin style really is pretty cool. And very graphic too :D |
 GrnEydDvl 2008-05-19 . chapter 1Very well written. You did a great job with this. |
 Lika 2007-08-06 . chapter 1 I *LOVE* this fic so much. It was such a great imagining of what their initial relationship was like, and I love how you mixed the humour, action, and some awesome characterization together. You nailed the characters. I'm particularly impressed with how you kept Matsumoto lazy and cheeky but had her kick ass as well. I find that Matsumoto is the lazy drunk who drives her captain crazy in some fics and a serious, ass-kicking vice-captain in others, and it's not often that someone merges the two. I love how she's dead serious here, but still skips out on work, manages to almost decapitate her captain and then joke about the one night stand. Hitsugayag's grumbling about that is *perfect*.
I always though they more or less hit it off when they first started, maybe Hitsugaya was annoyed, but Matsumoto didn't mind him, so it was interesting to read a fic where they both were annoyed with each other. You presented that so well that I almost saw it in anime form. Of course the fact that your fight scenes are so vividly written helps a lot. Plus the dialogue was fantastic (especially the part when they both agreed not to change their styles). I could see why they became such a great captain/vice-captain team. |
 Shadow Fox777 2007-07-14 . chapter 1lol. |
 kingleby 2007-05-13 . chapter 1them two make such an odd team, but it works! great story ^_^ |
 Warg 2006-11-16 . chapter 1Couldn't help but take a peak after what the Baka.. umm nm
Very amusing read this, and expected no lessafter the summary.
First thought that comes to mind is that them must have been some pretty tough hollows..
Apart from that, your characters were drawn brilliantly and the entire tenth was handled with "finesse" :P
And the entire atmosphere was chilly, wet and brooding.
Very nice work.. and i'll look forward to the rest of your Bleach things ^__^
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 Yukiko Tsukishirou 2006-10-16 . chapter 1o cool! very nice fic bout how tenth division vice and captain became comrades-in-arms...nice ^_^
~Tsuki-chan |
 AnimeSiren 2006-07-13 . chapter 1LOL i like this story! |
 BebopSamurai 2006-05-14 . chapter 1 Great job, and very in-character as well. |
 Namonaki 2006-04-16 . chapter 1You rock~~
I have been searching high and low for stories liek these, mainly stories about Matsumoto and Hitsugaya...
Not really coupling based, but partnershipped based...
Thank you for the awesome story. You definitely deserve this review
* -5 Stars :p
~Namonaki~ |
 Dread Pirate Rinja 2006-04-10 . chapter 1Kel!! That was a wonderful one-shot! :D I really liked your take on the development of Matsumoto's and Hitsu-chan's relationship, and the action was marvelously written (as always)! Thank you so much for sharing this with us. :3 I look forward to reading your next several Bleach one-shots! I'm liking this kick, I am. XD
(Sorry this isn't a longer review... T__T I read it last night, so I'm having a harder time commenting on more detailed stuff! Bwah.)
Much love, and *poke*... Please, Kel, may I have some more? XDD *isshot* |
 TransTurtle 2006-04-10 . chapter 1*squealz* I love matsumoto and hitsugaya *-*
Nice work done~ |