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| Quill-32 2006-12-28 ch 4, | abuseThis is a sweet, crisp story--good for you for not taking the obvious route and going with a romance! I like your interpretations of both characters and your explanation for Vartann's admittedly derogatory comment about large women. The casefile was a good framework for them working things out, and I appreciate Vartann's actual affinity for curves, as he put it. Very well done. |
| anmani 2006-10-02 ch 4, | abuseHey there. Great story. I've also fallen quite badly for Vartann and have begun to incoorperate him into my stories. I don't post much here on ff because of upload issues. I think that you have him pretty well picked and good reasons for his behaviour in 'big middle' and 'Iced'. A small note is that Cavalieri has been given a first name on the show, it's Chris. /A |
| pat 2006-04-20 ch 4, anon. | abuseHi,I enjoyed your story. Hope to see more in the same vein. |
| forensicsfan 2006-04-18 ch 4, | abuseI loved this. :) I love Vartan and it was nice to read a story that explored his character and I liked his interaction with Sophia who I also like because she doesn't take crap off of any man. Loved that they had forged a friendship by the end. :) Bravo. |
| DarkDreamer56 2006-04-18 ch 4, | abuseSad to see this one go, but I definitely enjoyed reading it. I really hope we get to see Vartaan again this season. Can't wait for your next fic endeavor! |
| forensicsfan 2006-04-13 ch 3, | abuseI'm glad that Vartan appears to be working through his funk and that Sophia lightened up a bit. I'm still enjoying your take on these characters. |
| DarkDreamer56 2006-04-10 ch 2, | abuseI normally stick to reading Nick/Sara stories, but I've enjoyed all your other stuff, and I'm a fan of Vartaan, so I decided to take a peak at this story. I'm really enjoying it, I love your characterization of Vartaan, and can't wait for the update :) |
| anniebree 2006-04-10 ch 2, | abuseI've never read a Vartann fic so I can't compare to anything else but this is really great. Very believable. And I'm going to keep reading, despite Sofia not being one of my fave characters. Good job! |
| forensicsfan 2006-04-10 ch 2, | abuseI love this, and yes, I think that your Vartan is believable. I also really like the tension that you've created between him and Sophia. I'm not sure whether you're planning on keeping her as the antagonist or not, but I like this; it helps in the development of the personal angst you've created for Vartan. It would be nice if the pair of them could come out as friends because I think you need that in police work, and I just really like Sophia even though I know tons of people can't stand her. |
| Sahariah 2006-04-08 ch 1, | abuseWhat a great idea for a story! We've barely seen any of those two (S&V) in the last while. This certainly promises to be very interesting... (I know I'm captivated, haha) Please update soon! |
| forensicsfan 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseOh, what a nice thought. I love Vartan and I love Sophia. :) Hmm, this should be fun. |
| GSR1TruPassion 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseYour story was good. It would have been better WITHOUT Sofia ( I hate her:( |