i love how this story contains the conversation bellatrix and andromeda had
in chapter eight of a keen observer. i think that was brilliant:] this is a great,
no absolutely SUPERB one shot:]

Ah, it's as if it's a cut scene from "A Keen Observer." Very nicely done, DDS.

~Koky

Amazing.

I really like this story. The way you write is lovely.
I'm pretty bad at reviews, but all you need to know is that I liked it.
ROH

i love bellatrix's personality here
it makes her seem a lot more human
and less crazy

Oh, that was really good! You write Bella really well! I'm curious as to what the letter said, though.

~ Kyota

I really liked this - an emotional side of Bella. It's nice to think that she could feel once, and that she actually loved Andromeda. :)

Cool! It strikes me that Bella is the kind of girl that, when she gets angry, rather than throwing things, she kills someone instead, but, you know; anything goes... Like how she views it as a betrayal, but how she could never understand that it's not.

Great fic. I love how you write Bellatrix and just the Blacks in general; it's exactly how I see them.

Great fic! I love Bellatrix's characterization! It was so in-character for Bellatrix to view Andromeda's departure as a betrayal, even if she *hadn't* promised her anything.

Well done!

~ TET

I can count the amount of FanFics that have made me feel so much emotion as to cry on one hand. I believe you will be happy to note that this was one of them. You're characterization of Bellatrix is superb, and I can't imagine it written any better. Yet another one for the favorite's!

~100-percent-HP-obsessed

I love it! I love your perception of the Black sisters and their relationship. I love to death Sirius, and I'm starting to like Bella just as much, because of the way you portray her in your stories. It's not OOC, it's just her veiw, her version of events. Great story, keep it up!-Padfoot

Oh this is also wonderful. Full of tension. My heart just leapt when Sirius walked in, and then started being all Sirius at her.

You have such a good clear idea of the Black family and you paint them so beautifully. The characters are just how i imagined them (although bella slightly more human. my Bella would've chucked the letter into the fire but anyway, your bella is probably more realistic).

Just read it, and it was really... good, I think, if that's the right word to use. I don't know. This story agitated a weird feeling in me. Hm. Well, I dunno, I liked it, I think that's all there is to say.

Right, right...lack of vocabulary...hum...hum...right... I love you ^^?