Brilliant story! I really enjoyed it! Very cute!

oh... lol, very funny! trying to have a serious conversation with your conscious is impossible... ugh

lol, very cute though, like it a lot!

Wow. This was certainly an interesting piece to read- the writing style is unique and distinctive, yet lends itself to the story flawlessly. However, the lack of punctuation [while deliberate] was somewhat distracting for a nitpicky reader like me; the story still pulled off a very nice effect, and I just have to say: good job. ;)

hey, that was a really funny story, i liked it heaps. keep up the good work! luv, k.

This story is perfect.

Absolutely wonderful, the conflicting feelings, the confusion, the hesitation and then the ending...just absolutely wonderful!

Thank you for sharing it, am gonna add it to my faves and recommend it on the S/J board I post at.

Great work :D

Very sweet. I love it. I can just see Sam overthinking all of that. Great job!

Hey, just read ya story and i gotta say, i liked it, it made me smile :) hehe, nice one!