Very well written Neo-kun. Probably the best songfic I've read. I love the way the emotions are portrayed within it and the song goes along well.

Wow, that was long, but good. I like exciting. Hey just check your spelling and grammar. so that's it. Good first one shot

Beautiful; That was such a great fic. Outstanding. Goodness, I have no clue what else to say. (And that's saying something. xD) I enjoyed the way you explained in detail how each girl felt about each other and the man they love. I just have to say, you made this girl extremely happy after she finished reading. Grr to cliffhangers. lol I look forward to another Inuyasha fic from you.

Great story Neo! Please write a sequel, but don't let inuyasha choose find a way to get him out of hit. Please!

10 out of 10

yo neo!

loved it, what do u think? Kikyo or Kagome? actually I don't know either but it rocks! YAAY!

Okay, can I cry now? This is the kind of story that just kills my heart. Not literally, of course, but it is so beautiful and touching and heart breaking at the same time. You have a great gift at writing. I don't care for Kikyo much, but this makes her seem more likeable to me. Thank you. I love this kind of story!

It's so gooD! You have to keep writting!

A One-shot Fiction with a cliff-hanger... Never seen that before.

I would say 'update!' but...

Make a new story please!

I love this song, even though I'm haven't heard it yet...

I'll hear it soon, though.

You're right, I LOVED it! However, HOW COULD YOU JUST LEAVE IT RIGHT THERE!

You know something, I usually don't feel bad for Kikyou, though I wish I could. I just can't. Though your story is really nice, I just can't feel bad for her. Love the one shot thought, very nice ideas.

No way would Inuyasha choose Kikyo...would he?

Come on! You have got to be kidding me! You can not I repeat CAN NOT LEAVE A CLIFFHANGER ON A ONE SHOT! UPDATE BRFORE I DIE OF SUSPENCE! Pretty please with Ramen on top? :D:D:D:D:D:D

I felt so choked up, it's hard to even consider seeing the light, when the darkness is all we feel. While angels are there to mend our hearts, there are angels that play along, like it was a game. Beautiful. BEAUTIFUL.

O.o So awsome! You had maybe..two spelling errors, but anyways, it was very good. Awsome detail, and great cliffy. I really hope you make a sequal, and from my side of thinking, I think you should make it end up being Kagome he chooses...but make a little twist in the plot so Inuyasha doesn't end up killing Kikyo, becuae I know you like Kikyo a lot. :P Keep up the awsome work and "update/continue" to the sequal of this awsome oneshot!

n_n

Miss VamPyress

(rokker)

Wow, I think this is the best thing you wrote. Your writing has really improved since you started writing. There were a couple grammar mistakes, but nothing too serious. Surprisingly, I like the ending. Like I said before, alternate ending chapters would be nice... but not necessary. I still don't like Kikyou very much... well the dead version anyway. I don't think I mentioned it before but the reason I don't like her is because she finds out that Naraku was the one that killed her and she still hates Inuyasha and even gives Naraku the Shikon no Tama. That just made me think she was on crack. But when they show flashbacks of Kikyou, I like who she used to be... before she was consumed by hate and tried to drag Inuyasha to hell.