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| Miyano Ran 2008-08-20 ch 4,  | abusevery cute! |
| Miyano Ran 2008-08-20 ch 3, | abuseI so agree with you, I hate people who say that Ai is cold and cynical...ughh...that comment just makes my blood boil for pete's sake! Argh!! Ai may be cold sometimes, but she has a kind heart, why? The number one proof is that she makes the antindote for Shinichi! I really like this...I love love love Haibara's sarcasm! XD |
| Miyano Ran 2008-08-20 ch 2, | abuseum...five times six is thirty not thirty six...better change that typo wow! I really like this one! Ai-chan is his treasure...ow...how sweet... |
| Miyano Ran 2008-08-20 ch 1, | abuseaw...sweet... |
| Sunago 2008-08-06 ch 4, | abuseI really liked reading this! I think it showed what Conan and Ai were thinking and feeling perfectly. |
| YinYangDarkLight 2008-03-16 ch 2, | abuseYes! I love friendship stories. Too many romantic ones out there sometimes. Oh, and I don't know if you did this on purpose, but five times six is thirty. Keep writing! -Yinnie |
| YumeOmokage 2007-09-23 ch 4, | abuseI love your stories! Great flow and transition. Very cute too! |
| BlackMailer 2007-08-10 ch 4, | abuseAw...you know, some things are too sweet for this world, and this is definitely one of them. I loved it a lot. |
| Claude le noctambule 2006-08-01 ch 3, | abuseA sweet and wonderfull drabble which catch perfectly the strange and particular relation between those two... And a great characterization of the cold and warm strawberry little chimist...^^ Well...Nothing much to say...Except...Made other one...;) |
| RanMouri82 2006-08-01 ch 3, | abuseYum . . . for a backburner project, this fic was more scrumptious than Conan's lunch. This actually comes closer to Haibara's sentiments about herself, Conan, and the cure than most Conan/Ai fanfics. I really enjoyed Ai's irritation and her cool, yet resistant introspection. Keep up the good work! |
| KristiexxNguyen 2006-07-31 ch 3, | abuseCute - very cute ^^ And yes, I enjoyed it =) And who said she's a cynical **? @_@ And even if you don't update often, at least you *do* update. |
| Dazja 2006-07-31 ch 3, | abuseHaha, I do that too when I don't feel like answering someone's questions |
| Astarael00 2006-07-30 ch 3, | abuseHer timing is /perfect/, and hilarious to boot. "Saved by the bell," indeed. *grins* A bit too much hissing and heavy sarcasm; even when the two were alone in the beginning they didn't really act like that. She freaked him out in the street by pretending to have killed Hakase, sure, but it was all in good fun - for her. Other than that, it's a good short. Hope to see more CA from you in the future. |
| Fredryck 2006-07-30 ch 3, | abuseWow, that was nice... :D Ai can really drive Conan mad when she wants to...I found this chapter very amusing! i hope to see the next chapter soon... ;) |
| Candyland 2006-07-30 ch 3, | abuse*grabs you and dances you around the room* I really like your characterization of Haibara here. She's not a cold, cynical **; I've never thought so (wow, I just used a semi-colon in a review. I WINZ!). She's had a rough life, and she's a very private person. Makes for an interesting dynamic between Shinichi/Conan's know-it-all-ness and Ran's open cheerfulness and Heiji's cheery impulsiveness and Gin's EVIL! I think that's one of the big reasons why we all love this show. So much in terms of character dynamics... Another lovely story, m'dear. And yay for back-burner projects! I'm looking forward to reading more of this, as always *purrs* |