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Moonbird
2008-06-10 . chapter 14
belive me or not, you after Zorro stories both fascinates me so much and scares me to death because they are about getting old and settling down, I simply coulden't stop reading them untill I was done. One thing I miss though and think could have been so damn funny would be just a small after Zorro story taking place about a week after the unmasking, were Diego and Alejandro is chasing some bandits or something together, and Alejandro keeps forgetting that Diego is Zorro.
WolfDaughter
2006-10-15 . chapter 14
Oh, good. I'm glad you put in the epilogue. I was wondering through the last several chapters what had happened to Senor Maldonado (and also who he was). Sorry I fell behind on your story, I'm afraid I was lacking in internet access for a time.
smithcrafter
2006-07-01 . chapter 13
I'm glad there's going to be an epilogue. I wasn't sure what I thought about this story when it first started, but the farther it went the better it got. Thank you.
jkl88
2006-07-01 . chapter 13
That was sure a quick pregnancy! I thought we'd have to wait months for that baby. When do we get the epilogue? Great chapter. Thanks, jkl88.
KK1522
2006-06-24 . chapter 12
¡Madre de Dios! Heh, I knew that chapter ending was going to happen...but still...:)

I look forward to the next chapter like always. Keep up the good work!
Kari
2006-06-24 . chapter 12
Oh this is good. What will diego think of it now!
jkl88
2006-06-16 . chapter 11
I'm so glad to see another chapter. It was sad, but wonderful. Poor Diego, the next chapter should be interesting considering his ban from the bedroom. jkl88.
jkl88
2006-06-05 . chapter 9
Thank you for another great chapter. It makes such great sense Diego taking the children to see their mother...the exact opposite of how his own father treated the illness and death of Diego's mother. Please post more and soon. Thanks, jkl88.
WolfDaughter
2006-05-31 . chapter 8
Ai, you can't just leave it there! Update, update, update! Poor Victoria and poor Diego, we have to know what happens! And what became of Maria?
Beverly
2006-05-31 . chapter 8
Gracious! I've been away from fan-fiction for a while dealing with health issues, and what do I find? One of my favorite authors writing a compelling storyline that is starting to be far too ominous. Please don't take a page out of Smithcrafter's book. I need a happy ending to cheer me up
jkl88
2006-05-30 . chapter 8
Thanks so much for posting another chapter. Poor Diego. Please don't kill off Victoria...and when do the boys discover that Diego was Zorro? Please post again soon. Thanks, jkl88
jkl88
2006-05-22 . chapter 7
I enjoyed this so much...but I wish the baby hadn't died. Please post more and soon. Thanks, jkl88.
WolfDaughter
2006-05-16 . chapter 6
Yay, updates! I knew the boys were going to be having a great time. :-) I figured maybe Maldonado was scaring them with ghost stories or some such thing. I'm still trying to figure out who he is. I'm certain I should know, but perhaps you haven't given us enough clues yet. Anyway, please update again soon!
karith
2006-05-13 . chapter 6
Please continue
it's good
WolfDaughter
2006-05-08 . chapter 5
Actually, nothing was wrong with chapter 4. I actually left a review, but I have no idea what happened to it. :-(
At any rate, I'm glad you're feeling better! With a cliffhanger like that, I'm hoping you update extremely quickly! Of course, you've fooled us before and I'm sure you could throw in another twist or two. For all I know, the shrieking could be two boys having a great time while Senore Maldonado tells them scary stories or something along those lines. Please post chapter 6 soon!
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