|Reviews for A Time of Reckoning|
| Starhunter79 3/31/13 . chapter 6
Great story. It is heartwarming and hilarious. The things that Qui Gon will do for Obi Wan, I love it. Poor Obi Wan, he's devistated but still trying to act like a responsible adult. One thing what are the consequences to Obi Wan's partner? First, I thought it was going to be something terrible some horrible pain or death but then it sounded like it might be a life bound or maybe pregnancy. If a consequence of sleeping with Obi Wan was being forced into a life bound then I say to hell with consequences, lol. I don't think being life bounded to Obi Wan is something terrible, not to mention Qui Gon. I see this is a love story, not to say that it is a romantic love, it is the love between a father and son. I don't mind slash especially Qui Gon Obi Wan stories ( I didn't start reading Obidala until I read your stories but I like that pairing as well). Qui Gon is willing to do anything to save his Obi Wan and I myself don't think it's such a burden to sleep with a young, beautiful, kind, strong, sweet Jedi. I loved how Obi Wan would look at Qui Gon with "burning desire" and then either one would remind Obi Wan about his meds. And that comment about becoming one with the force was awesome. The end was so sweet, Qui Gon just talking to him but part of me wanted them to not make it to the ship in time, lol. Thank you for your wonderful story.
| Guest 10/9/12 . chapter 6
That was funny.
| kirallie 4/11/07 . chapter 6
Amusing and fun. Keep up the good work!
| Maccan 9/19/06 . chapter 3
'Trust me, you will already have become one with the Force.'
Excuse me as I wander off to guy snicker.
| Shannon C. Redfield 5/30/06 . chapter 6
Aw! They had a touching moment. *Sweet sigh*
*Raised eyebrow* At least not in the way you think! Perverted people... ROFL
| Shannon C. Redfield 5/30/06 . chapter 5
*Rubs hands together in anticipation* Oh this oughta be good...mhmm. This OUGHTA be good. Tee-hee!
| Shannon C. Redfield 5/30/06 . chapter 4
Master Shithead...his butt in the air...
HA! Instant classics, right there!
| Shannon C. Redfield 5/30/06 . chapter 3
ROFLH Now THIS is my favorite chapter! The slight seduction, the erotic thoughts...oo, this is so excellent! HA!
Become one with the Force should be try this again-now THAT was funny!
| Shannon C. Redfield 5/30/06 . chapter 2
Keep lightsaber in pants, he will! *Laughing* What a near-horny story this is turning out to be! Seduction, erotic fantasies, savage pleasure from sex...oh wait, its not in this chapter. ROFLH
| Shannon C. Redfield 5/30/06 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh...so this is a "sexy" story? A pure Sexy-Wan story? *Giggles and jumps up and down in delight* FINALLY!
At least he hasn't decided to molest Qui-Gon... *Almost falls out of her chair from hard laughter*
| Kenobifan 4/26/06 . chapter 6
Whew! I bet Qui-Gon was relieved. Not only him but Obi too!
Well, maybe not Obi! LOL Poor, poor Obi. What's a horny-wan suppose to do?
And when is Padme going to be showing up..so they can find each other?...And well Obi can finally be relieved and that should make a happy Padme as well. LOL
FUNNY, FUNNY chapter. UPDATE SOON! I'm enjoying the read. Very original I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
| QueenMeep 4/22/06 . chapter 5
I suppose they are making the recordings after the fact...
I'm thinking you might need to change the summary as so far with chapter five and no Padme in sight, it doesn't seem as much like an Obidala... or are you just keen for that much build-up? LOL
Making me antsy, here!
| jedi71 4/21/06 . chapter 5
What could possibly happen in 2 days...? 7one
| Padawan Sydney Bristow 4/21/06 . chapter 5
wow poor obi! and poor qui-gon. Why do I get the feeling that Qui-Gon is goona have to go through some prety...*ahem* terrible things in the next two days. lol! UPDATE!
| Kenobifan 4/21/06 . chapter 5
Oh, oh...no medication? For another two days?
I don't know who to feel sorry for Qui-Gon or Obi? LOL
I suppose both.
Hm m m, will be interesting to see what happens before they reach their ship!
And the Sumarian girl, surely Obi would remember if anything happened between them?
Enjoyed the read. Update soon! :)