twas really gud...

i get tha title but it is a lil 'you kno' guessing...??

finish finish finish!

ad jake in aswell

as a bf!!

tht iz ma favourite!

i really like it, but i would reccomend you start some paragraphs...

You people who get to work with horses are so lucky! Please write more!

Good, no not good GREAT!

OMG! SO GOOD! UD SOON PLZ!

wat about her 2 other promblems

Love the story. Can't wait to the read the next chapter.

I like it, but are you going to update it? I want to read more!

Yes, keep writing, please... I really like your story and would like to know what happens next...

OH MY GOD this is so incredably amezing please update soon. one question is this goig to be SAM/JAKE

heya, great chappy. keep up the good work. dont worry about updating often if your scheduals busy...
*~Firefly~*

Do keep writing...
It's really good. There were some few minor spelling mistakes, but it was still good!
~Amber

Oh my goodness~I absalutely love that song!
It's a Pretty good story!
Try changing the format to left align. It would be better.
keep it up! :D
~Amber

it is ok, but u shud make mor paragraphs cause long paragraphs r hard to read and some people literally skip them.

Hiya, great chapter. i'm not sure about sam's age... i think that's right. and i believe Zanzibar is spelt with an E but dont trust me about that, i'd probably spell it wrong even if i had the book in front of me! the only fault in your story is that everything is forced together in a big block. maybe try seperating teh paragraphs and moving people's speach onto the next line, k? it just makes it easier to read... you know i think this is the longest review i have ever written! keep up the good writing.

~-Firefly-~