Update =D

Judging by the lack of updates and concidering its almost 2008 i doubt you will continue the story, but i would like to say i quite like it so far, hope you do end up continuing

This made me laugh a lot.

But thanks to you my mom now thinks I'm crazy.

Whatever, keep it up!

hmm... I really don't care about your english!
Me, myself have problems with it *laughs nervously*
and my best friend, (She's American) has problems spelling! haha
Anyways.
UPDATE! I'm Really Dying to know what's going to happen next!
AND~ I must add that the part of the coloring books just killed me XD
UPDATE!

XD OMG. This is coming out so great! I love the whole idea, and the Axel and Demyx part was funny. x3 I love how you make them live in the more.. bad parts of a city, its great. ;D I love their attitude, its probably soo much more different than Roxas's and Sora's. Anyways, update! O.o I see you haven't updated in a while, so please do it soon! :D

that made me laugh it was great up date soon!

Wow. Cute! I wonder when Riku pops up, is it soon? I like the whole character you gave Cloud, too flipping cute ^-^ Colouring books. xD

Anyways, I'm so favouriting this. ^^ Uh huh! It's awesome! I hope you update soon! Keep up the great work! :D

hmm. i like it so far, i'm all about the side pairings ;) CLC and Riku/Sora are my OTPs. :D But i'm interested to see where you go with this! :D

Pretty Racing

Ep, I love this story, can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^

Ohh... I really like this story so far! I can't wait to read the next part.

I like it! Heehee,keep goin kepp goin! ^_^

Haha, funny!^_^ Update this soon.

And I didn't see anything wrong with this. It's fine the way it is. Your writing mainly goes right to the point so nothing's wrong with that.

Demyx have a mohwak? i thought he just have short spike hairs?

that wasn't half bad, in fact, i'd love to read more!

Wow, that's great!

"Coloring books?"

LOL MY SPLEEN

*catches breath*

Gawd, though, Cloud really is blond (no offense intended) to do something like that!

The best part was when Axel was like,
"Someone call the fire department 'cause this one's SMOKIN'!"

LMAO

That was fantastic.

Please update ASAP

~*~*~*~Hikaru Irving~*~*~*~