HAHAHAHAH Gojyo ish kool!

this is awesome! when are you updating?

hope you update soon!

update now!

Too darn lazy to sign in...oh well this is excellent! Hahahahahahaha...god I love Sanzo, Kougaiji and Goku...hehehe..they are the best!

Reanne

I feel like you need an honest opinion of this story.

First of all, it was REALLY unoriginal to have all the characters match the other characters. I don't think I've seen one story where some people from our world come in to the Saiyuki world and end up having the characters with the same traits (in this case, Ritsuki & Hakkai, Yasuko & Gojyo, etc.) NOT get together (at least make Yasuko get with Gojyo and Kohaku with with Goku or SOMETHING...). It's especially unoriginal since it was listed in the beginning just plainly and clear as day. It should have been more descriptive and in the story, not right in our face. It's hard having to go back to figure out what each character does instead of learning by following the story. Do you get what I mean?

However, it WAS original that this started with a lottery ticket. I don't think I've ever seen that before. The only other things are that Internet DOES NOT exist in some 1900s world-especially in China.

Now, don't get me wrong, I can read what is being said in your story, but for some reason it just makes me angry when people list foreign words in their stories and don't even tell the readers what they mean. Don't put it in a A/n right after the word or phrase, but maybe put a bold number by it and then once done with the chapter have a small area available as the word translating place.

PLEASE make the chapters longer. Size 14 font for 10 pages is all I'm asking.

PLEASE don't focus just on your characters. This is a Saiyuki fanfiction, right? Put them in there more. That's a reason why you haven't gotten more reviews.

Work on grammar and spelling. Don't go into another language if you cannot even use your own English grammar properly, k?

Now, despite how harsh this may have sounded for you, it was an honest and admittingly blunt critizement. I will also admit I'm not the best writer or English professionist, but from my experience with writing, I find these fixable errors and make them more noticable for YOU. I also like this story generally, despite how my review went, so I'm adding this story to my favorites. Don't be afraid to respond back if you have any questions or just wanna bash me for constructively cristizing your story. -DXP

AWESOMME keep writing. DOn't stop PLEASE!And keep updating. I finally memorized who's who

It doesn't matter if you have little reviews what matters are the loyal readers.

YOur fan

Iriomote yamaneko nokomis

i admit it was rather short, but at least now we all know of the whereabouts of the lotto ticket...yay?

BUT THAT DOESN'T CHANGE THE FACT THAT YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON! ESPECIALLY BECAUSE THIS CHAPTER WAS SHORT!

...aherm... sorry for the outburst. need i say more?

Your story's great.I do wonder if there's a possible chance either Arizu,Yasuko,Kohaku,or Ritsuki would be watching "Saiyuki" through Kohaku's laptop while traveling West...just a thought...

love it. please update soon. need i say more?

nice chapters here! can't wait for the next ones to be up!

i wish someday i could chat with sanzo though. oh well, just gotta live with this cruel world.

Well, I have to thank you bunches for not going with the incredibly annoying female-insert cliche in Saiyuki, which is four incredibly sexy women, almost always including one half-breed, have all these powers and are just so fucking stupid to read! I really don't think that sentence was grammatically correct, but never mind. This story's pretty interesting, and you should update soon!

can't wait till sanzo-ikkou would get in the picture! please update soon!

nice progress! i can wait for three chapters or so, regarding the appearance of the sanzo-ikkou!

please update soon! i am so looking forward to the next one!

Interesting story! I hope you'll gonna update soon!