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Ahh, Greg is so adorable. So cute and nice.

I like how your portrayed him in this (short) story.

Very nice. Interesting viewpoint, I was quite impressed by your characterizations and excellent use of dialouge, surburb.

Aww, Greg's such a sweetheart. I just love the picture you've painted!

That was a really nicely done portrait of Greg. And a well handled POV of a homeless woman. I'm impressed. Thanks.

Great story. I enjoyed the unique perspective.

Good fic.

that was so sweet. i hope theres more!

Omg! that brought a tear to my eye! I swear it honestly did. that was so sweet...i loved it, even though it does have a reference to GSR and i'm a sandle fan, that was still great. Keep up the good work!

*teared up* That's so cute! Great story, please keep it up!