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| Cookie Gestapo 2007-04-04 ch 1, | abuseAhh, Greg is so adorable. So cute and nice. I like how your portrayed him in this (short) story. |
| Dattatreya 2006-10-30 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. Interesting viewpoint, I was quite impressed by your characterizations and excellent use of dialouge, surburb. |
| Syvah 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abuseAww, Greg's such a sweetheart. I just love the picture you've painted! |
| Gabrielle Lawson 2006-06-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was a really nicely done portrait of Greg. And a well handled POV of a homeless woman. I'm impressed. Thanks. |
| AzureHart 2006-04-09 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. I enjoyed the unique perspective. |
| CSIFan4Life 2006-04-08 ch 1, | abuseGood fic. |
| silverz 2006-04-07 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was so sweet. i hope theres more! |
| tweaky2424U 2006-04-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseOmg! that brought a tear to my eye!! I swear it honestly did. that was so sweet...i loved it, even though it does have a reference to GSR and i'm a sandle fan, that was still great. Keep up the good work! |
| LeaMarie F. Metallium 2006-04-07 ch 1, | abuse*teared up* That's so cute! Great story, please keep it up! |