awsome story. love the genie aspect. cant wait to read more

ah...things really really don look good for the Himes at this point...

why is shizuru refusing to sleep with natsuki?
i thought that's what she want too. afterall, she loves natsuki and is happy with her, wanna take their relationship to another level.
natsuki should just come out and said it or surprise shizuru in her sleep...
poor girl is love sick and shizuru seem to be the perfect medicine.

natsuki's sick b/c she's been dreaming about shizuru, dreams that frustrated her b/c she can't fulfill it in reality..?
cute..LOL
i hope shizuru know that and swap natsuki of her feet :D

natsuki is so cute here
she say she wanna have sex with natsuki like it was nothing...i mean she wasn't shy about it...so it's cute in a way.
yeah, good lucky natsuki

wow, that was sadly sweet :)
your writing is pretty damn beautiful, i could totally feel the awkwardness

I am striking out... all these great stories and no ending...:(

ah..that's the bug that Natsuki keep on seeing huh...?

i mean it's just a bug right? ...how badass can it be..?

This is a really interesting story. The way you shift berween the different point of views really gives some rythm to this story.

Everything seems to be so messed up for the different characters. Even for the two who managed to build a promising relationship there seems to be no happy ending.

i feel like they're in some sort of dream world where mai and natsuki are the ones trapped in... i actually have no idea. but the intrigue is getting to me. i'd like to see mikoto grow up a little here. and more clues to what is happening!

that was...interesting :) i look forward to more then^^

nice! im re-reading this^^ guess i shall continue it here :)

The thing happening to Natsuki is really weird.. Including the part where 'Seran', 'Imari' and, Nao/Sil/Keiko was mentioned.. Does Sakuya have a major part in these events or i she just an observer??..

I hope my questions will be answered soon..

Interesting, and I came with so many bloody theories in such a short amount of time that it all jumbled somehow, and I can't even start to put it in line. Only thing I can REALLY think about is the pink-haired girl being a rejuvenated Fumi.

oh...
more plot. yes~! hmm...im just wondering how these dreams...are affecting the hime... XD pls update.

renny-chan