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| LetsRuinTheEnding 2008-06-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseDark in the best way possible. Don't really get the last sentence though. |
| PrettyLilJewGirl 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseAH SO BEAUTIFUL! Well, more like so scary. But yeah. This isn't really a CartmanxKyle, though- it's more of a StanxKyle or a really strong StanxKyle friendship. IT was so amazing that Stan dreamt about what was happening to Kyle... that happened to me and my friend once!! |
| Kinky O o h . l a . l a a 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseGorgeous ending, the lines were perfect. Very interesting, and Cartman is such a creep. ^-^ |
| KnuxZ 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseWow... That was... wow. I can't think of words. This is amazing. I love it. |
| myinukoi 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abuseAmazing!! |
| DiamondxPink618 2006-08-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow...that was a very powerful story for me. I loved how you wrote the interaction between Stan and Kyle throughout the story, even though I don't mind slash, I sometimes just like seeing the two of them as really close friends. If there was any Kyle/Cartman thing going on, this is exactly how I imagined it (Poor Kyle :( I think it'd be interesting if you could write this over twice, one in Cartman's POV and the other in Kyle's, I'd love to read that! |
| Kenny's SpaceCadet 2006-06-26 ch 1, | abuseWhoa...that was incredibly deep. I have read this story numerous times (lol) but it was only this time that I realized that the words in italics were Stan talking to Cartman in jail. I realized it when I read "His back turned to me, only half visible from behind the bars..." Somehow, I can see Cartman ending up this completely fucked up. I can even see it happening to Kyle. I think this was a wonderfully written story, I didn't think it was rushed at all. And I would never have guessed that English isn't your native language. You're just that good of an author lol. Keep on writing! |
| Spacefille 2006-06-16 ch 1, | abuseOh... lovely! You're on the same Author wavelength as I, my friend, that's EXACTLY how I'd imagine a Cartman/Kyle relationship would go. Nicely done, and I think you got your point across very well. I also enjoyed how supportive Stan was to his friend. Made me go "aww!" :) The only thing that confuses me is the last statement "love worth it all." I assume you meant "loves worth it all." No biggie, just thought I'd bring it up. ;) Thanks again for the wonderful fic! |
| Indiana Beach Bum 2006-05-10 ch 1, | abuseWhoa. Dark. Terrifying. I know that part of me shouldn't have smiled at the inward amusing thought of how Kyle literally threw up because Cartman kissed him. No, not after what Cartman ended up doing instead. But that part DID make me smile. I shudder to think about the manipulative advances Eric Cartman could give Kyle. I mean, we all know what he's capable of. This is totally different from something I've read of yours before. I like it, it gives me chills and I hear dark, demonic movie playing in the background when I envision it. I imagine the halls of the school to be lined with candles and people in red robes, and when Kyle is running, his screams and actions are amplified. Its just the way you tell it. |
| dansyngqueen 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was pretty intense. Gives me the chills. I feel bad for Kyle that the only one he could confide in was Stan, and Stan was not there when he was need the most. Heart wrenching story. |
| x.o.x.lizz.x.o.x 2006-04-09 ch 1, | abuseThis fic scared me, but it was just so well written. Rape is generally caused by a need for power (we just did studied that in school :P) and I can so see Cartman as some one hungry for power over the one he loves. |
| SpamLord 2006-04-08 ch 1, | abuseYou're really good at writing a malicious Cartman. I always wind up making him an angsty little child. I really liked this. Good job. :D |
| Thrillzone 2006-04-08 ch 1, | abuseWow... This really is an amazing story. I love how it was told from Stan's point of view, though after reading it, now I'm curious as to what Cartman's perspective would've been like. *shudder* Poor Kyle... |
| Coffeey 2006-04-08 ch 1, | abuseAw poor Kyle :( Cartman is such a insensitive asshole. Good job though! 8)Coffeey |
| WolfBane2 2006-04-07 ch 1, | abuse(pleased) Take South Park, dip it in horror and sprinkle a little spice-of-nightmares across the top, and you've got this. You have done your readers well. Some fics portray the older Cartman as an efficient double-agent, other portray him as...well. Yeah. This. The reincarnation of Henry the 8th, bisexual-ified. Very original, very dramatic; takes its spirit from The Most Dangerous Game. Good work. (gives author a taco. Wanders off) |