Just wanted to say they probably didn't have high heels in Tortall. Most likely clogs or just slippers. Or boots in fact. Just general facts.

love it!

so much!

you should do a sequel!

-passes you a plate of cookies-

i really like this story and i find that you are a very good writer for sarcasm and i love the author note at the bottom

NO!

Not THE SPICE GIRLS!

*shudders* *whispers* They scare me...

I like!

Meh! Why did you have to end it there? You should have kept going! Anyways... I really liked this. You made it romantic but not... um... too... detailed. Yeah. I'm happy that I didn't have to kill you (which would have been a pity) over chapter 13, because I'm a Jon fan, not a George groupie. I actually hated the books for letting her marry George, and I still cannot read them because I get so angry. It also helps me to not see them, either. But I decided to give Alanna fanfic a chance, and yours was one of the first I read. You did an awesome job and should continue to write about them. I would recommend something about their wedding, personally, or something that includes the downfall of petty miss Delia. AWESOME WRITING! SIMPLY EPIC! I HAVE FALLEN IN LOVE WITH THIS FANFIC STORY! Keep up the good work.

Oh, and here's your helpful tip of the day:
Most readers of fanfic (I have polled myself to acquire this data) prefer medium length chapters, and preferably less (or slightly more if the chapters are small) than 12 chapters. It makes the story feel accessible to them reading-wise then. Like it won't take them forever to read it, but that they'll still be getting a quality, finished story.

So there ya go.

awesome story
so , by final you mean it the end of this story?
as in you wont continue?
poo
ah well
loved the story anywho, but wat ab roger? wat happeed to him??

I love the story. i love a/j! but why just end it there when you mentioned roger and delia and their wished to take over the throne?

That was such a sweet story. Group "Aw". Great job!

is there a squeal? please say there is one please

oh lala. love this chapter to bad its close to the end almost :'[

oh boy that doesnt sound to good

i think its freaky that she keeps having visions of things that hasn't happened to her

aww that is so cute. Haha in Delia's face. Jon is so romantic sometimes

OH lala. Alanna and George sitting in a tree k-i-s-s-i-n-g ffirst comes love then comes Jon then goes all sad