OMG, the ending is so sad. Can you please write an alternate ending to this story. Too depressing! :( Happier ending please...

PS, you did a great job writing the story.

Goddess Anjanee :)

Holy fuck. I just read your series tonight and all I can do is swear. I'm so torn over the bittersweet ending despite knowing it could only end in sadness. Will you write more A/A smut? Will you return to this fandom? Either way, thank you for writing this and satisfying the pervert in all of us.

But -damn- I wished it ended another way.

Hey Quinn

I'm sorry U r no longer 1 of my favorite FF author. But I still like u.

P.S.: Keep up the great work.

Waiting for more, Legair

Wah !_! No... that's so sad. You can't end the story here. There has to be more, please?

Hello, I found this story last night and while I have yet to review the previous stories I thought it was best to start with this one.

I will admit that as the previous story went along I saw the ending coming. I think the part of your story that you hit a snag on is that the Sorceress has no power over Etheria, so a disrememberence spell would be pointless. She can only open gates to and from Eternia & Etheria, thus everyone on Etheria would know the truth.

On a side note who do you envision as being Adam the First's wife (Since you skipped over that part in your epilogue)?

I just read your AdamAdora fics... Ugh, so good! So wrong, but so good! You made the twincest thing very believable. And this end was just heartbreaking, although I suspected it wasn't going to be all happily ever after.

Great stuff (^_^)

aw, it's finished? I've enjoyed this story from the beginning. I think the ending is sad but fitting.

Ah...So sad! ; ;
That's really the end? ^cries^

hm couldnt they have mixed and matched since almost noeone knows about their duel identities shera/adam he-man/adora.

Good finish, just wish it was a little longer seeing as how this is the end.

*sniffle*quivering lip*sniffle*

I had a feeling you might do this (even though I hoped you wouldn't!!), but it seems fitting and very ironic that what was done "to spare Adam the pain of [Adora's] loss", the Sorceress cast the spell to "wipe the memory of [Adora] and the Horde from the people of Eternia". But how SAD that Adora has to live with that pain! How sad that Adam *sniffles*...

The best stories don't always end the way you want them to, but that's what makes them great! Good job on this one *sniffles*, even though it made me kick my desk leg and yelp in pain.

Don't let this be the end! Keep writing Adam/Adora smut! Three cheers for Samantha Quinn!