sad but good, nice job!

wow. the last bit was so sad i had tears in my eyes. it's really good

omg! that was so sad! but it was really good.

She could feel them coming,

those tears in the back of her eyes,

as she read the final paragraph.

She waved her hand in front of her face, trying to keep them from coming,

but it was no good.

The word were too bittersweet,

too true,

to be reckoned with.

So they fell,

fast and thick.

She tried to stop them with a hand,

but it was no use,

a sad sweet lovesong came on, reenforcing the tears.

(which means I loved it. And then 'Hey there delilah' by Plain White T's came on, and it mad me cry even harder. Because I'm a sad little sap.)

So sad and beautiful... *tears in my eyes*

you told me to review, so um... I'm not a good reviewer, I liked it, it was sad and good, and uh... I liked it

awsome! poor remus! i like remus' character because i think that remus and lily would look good together. but i am more on a LJ fanatic. but this is really good too though.

Had to review. This fits nicely with the HP series, I must say. I don't go for many Remus/Lily fics myself, simply for the fact that a vast number of them aren't very well written, but yours was just...perfect, nearly! I don't listen to Tim McGraw, but the song sounds great. I have no criticism to cast upon you. This IS going to my favorites list, however, and yourself on my author alert list.

I look forward to more wonderful works from you!

Until further, I remain but your most humble Jedi Master,

M.J.

Wow. I love this song, and this story. I was crying by the end of it. haha, keep writing.

aw. sweet!

wow, its a very impressive fic. I have to confess im not a big RL shipper, but your fic really drew me in. REmus is lovely character but somehow we know so little about his life- and i feel you've taken what we do know and woven a truly wonderful fic. Very touching.

Wow. That was...amazing. It was really well written. I feel so bad for Remus. But this was really good. Good job.

Niamara

oh...that was really sweet-it nealy made me cry..