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| Seiichiro Watari 2006-10-07 ch 1,  | abuseThis was so touching... |
| DNA strand 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abuseAww...that was so sweet. Sure beats all the other fics I've been reading these few days. Go you! |
| KristiexxNguyen 2006-08-07 ch 1, | abusethat's really cute and matched them perfectly. beautiful ^^ |
| lauren borick 2006-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseFinnally a Aumuy and Hiyono fic! I was so happy to have finnally found one of these nobody seems to want to write about these two. Its a really cute fic and i enjoyed reading it |
| amber-eyed child 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abuseI can't say I've chosen my favorite couples of Spiral because I've just started reading/watching it, but I'd always thought that eventually, Hinoyo and Ayumu would become a couple. So I was kinda confused when I came onto the Spiral section of FF and skimmed and found no Ayumu/Hiyono fics, until this one. And because I've had bad FF experiences and because one-shots were usually fluff, I wasn't really excited, because I had been hoping for a Ayumu/Hinoyo fic badly and was upset by all the yaoi pairings. So imagine my surprise when I was disappointed when it came to an end. I was seriously close to pouting, which I don't really do much. I expected it to be gushy OOC-Ayumu filled, to tell the truth, which goes to show you can't judge a book. I really really liked your theme and I really really liked your style of writing. I don't normally review and I don't normally leave long reviews, but I feel like ranting on and on about how good this fic was. I think I'm favoriting it and you because I don't think I'll find another Ayumu/Hiyono fic like this on FF. It was great, and I hope to find more stories from you. |
| psychedelic aya 2006-07-11 ch 1, | abuseI actually liked it. A LOT. Its been quite some time since I've read anything concerning the Spiral fandom at all, and I was craving for an AyuHiyo. XP You gave me just the right thing. Nice writing style--introspective but with just enough conversation. And Hiyono's thoughts, if I may say, were also so very Hiyono. Nice job! |
| suriru 2006-07-09 ch 1, | abuseI thought this was very beautiful and well-written. Wonderful job. |
| hinata061389 2006-06-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is so amazing and beautiful... I love this story. This is the fisrt AyuHino I read and I'll never regret it. Keep it up. ^_^ ~hyuuga Hinata |
| Windaerie 2006-06-14 ch 1, | abuseExcellent piece of work. The simplicity of it all (though you claim it to be random thoughts) makes it a very worthwile fic. I don't think you need to change it a bit. Keep up the good work! |
| ElizabethMarieBennett 2006-06-13 ch 1, | abuseLovely, cant wait to read more |
| Macmac 2006-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was deep. Its interesting to see Ayumu and Hiyono's relationship through other people's eyes. I dont know about the manga, but the anime always, somehow, put Madoka in the way. |
| ebullience-JJ 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautifully written! The way they contrast eachother is really good. The ending is really nice. Its so like Narumi to never go beyond the boundaries of friendship and love; Waiting is something Hiyono would always do. Very in-character. Good job! |