I think you should continue this by having Lorelai explain to Luke why she is upset. On the show she pretends she is happy when she's not. We've all seen that, so make her say what she should have said.

you should contunue this fic i love it

its not very good

this was good, because it was what Lorelai would think. i keep waiting for her to tell Luke she wants to meet Anna and April, but she never does. anyway, good story continue pleaz

IF ONLY!

Well, i must say its in character, as of now, for both Luke and Lorelai. Good job.

good