You are evil! *grin* Nice work.

that is just evil... i loved it.

*biggrin*

...that ending was completely unexpected. Good job. _

AAAAAiiiiiiiieeeeeee! Oh man, you had me going! (So I'm gullible- that makes me a valuable audience, ne?) I was strongly reminded of the stories you hear around the campfire when you're about 12 or so... Excellent!

hahaha...?

This deserves a big ol' '...'

*grins* You really had me going there! Excellent! Excellent! I love pleasant surprises! *chuckles* Great work on this one, fooled me good.

Rather interesting story. I liked it.

I'm speechless.

Not bad!

...your good...very good.

This piece is not bad, but it would have been nicer if it was longer... (hint hint, wink wink) oP

Clever. Very clever.