I love it!

Your under arrest for killing off Theresa *Puts you in handcuffs* your going downtown

So depressing :(

As depressing and heart-breaking as it was, I loved it

Great story

I'm about to read the sequel!

wow,Im blinded by tears now,wow.

it was so sad :(

That was really beautiful...made me cry!

I'm going to read the sequal!

Bellax:) :D :P

It was really sad, and Jay didn't deserved to die.

Oh my gosh, it's just incredible! Well written, however, here's what I propose you do: this story would be great if you re-write it with a little bit more detail. It still would work as a one-shot fic, but with more detail, I'm pretty sure the story will be greater. Hope you edit and add more detail, make it longer. That way you'd satisfy your readers. The drama added was pretty emotional, but with detail (again, as I said before) it would be great-the readers would actually feel what the characters in the story is feeling. You have the advantage here, so use it. ) Good job by the way. You write well, hope I read more of your stories!

how could you you killed then muderer!

It was sort but good!

Shibby!

Aw, that is so sweet!

Captured jay really well i think, great job!

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That was sad..

When you described how Theresa got hit I could FEEL it. Ick, I hate drunk drivers.

Good writing.

And poor Jay. Well, now he can be with Theresa.

This story was very sweet and sad. A bit cliché at the end, but the constellations part was a nice touch. There were a few spelling/grammar errors, so try and read through more carefully next time. Also, it'd be nice to see a longer entry, though that's not for me to decide. Good job.

Holy shitters. Wow! Didn't see that coming. lol.

Well done. I enjoyed this story very much... even if it is sad. lol. I love the detail. Amazing :)

To be a bit honest though, I can't see Jay killing himself... now if he had to say, 'accidently' fall onto his sword... *whistles* haha.

Anywho, that made no sense, eh? lol! So anyway, yeah great story. And I see there is a sequel for me to read? lol. Away I go to read and review that!

Again, great story :D

Theresa and Jay are girlfriend and theier teengers not audts get the message maybe tell me about to write a story

I write it on the computer all the time if you want to see it you have to stop making Jay kill himself okay he

I wish she could come back to live not really dead in the that place where people are injuiny getting help ya

I think you should make a story about Atlanta Archie Theresa Jay Herry Neil Odie and thier new friends Deilah

And her 13 old brother she's 17 years old like Theresa and Atlanta and the boys are 18 years old get the message.