 Mousewolf 2006-08-07 . chapter 1Little victories. When the falcon stops biting the hand that feeds it. When the cat doesn't drag its bloodies kills in on the carpet. When your trusted enough to touch, and to hold.
Little victories. It's the small things that make the big things matter. |
 FreeSpiritedOne 2006-04-19 . chapter 1Ditto what I said about the other two pieces I've read. I hope you continue in this comic/movie verse because you really are inside V's head. |
 breadandchoc 2006-04-17 . chapter 1Wow. Such a simple task, but you captured the tense undercurrents of their relationship in all its flaws and imperfections *so very well*.
Thanks again! (And yes, finally get it about the leather and water question. Interesting continuation despite seperate fics) |
 Hallenee 2006-04-16 . chapter 1Love it!! |
 Kallanda Lee 2006-04-14 . chapter 1 I liked it. Ik found myself *not* skipping bits of story, which to me means it's well-written. I like the way you build up tension, and how you make an everyday event turn out-of-the-ordinary. |
 gerfan 2006-04-12 . chapter 1whoa, this was excellent, I liked it!! |
 HBCat 2006-04-09 . chapter 1 Really enjoyed this -- it packed a lot of quiet drama/character development into a short story. All the sensory/visual flavor was very compelling. |
 Weiver 2006-04-08 . chapter 1 Wow. This is probably one of the best fanfics i've read. I love the way you write. It takes a gifted writer to make a scene like this. Turning a menial task into a bonding moment. Anyway, good job. Do keep writing forever and ever. |
 mwfte 2006-04-08 . chapter 1Very nice. :-) |
 Psycho Mime 2006-04-08 . chapter 1Ah! Lovely vignette for our heroes. |
 musiclover106 2006-04-08 . chapter 1This was great. It is ashame that people cannot do more then just short little clips, because your writing is amazing. |
 Spicy Sith 2006-04-08 . chapter 1 Tense!! Very good plot ;) |
 WormmonABC 2006-04-08 . chapter 1Aw. That's sweet. One of the better VFV fics on here. Only issue is that it ends abruptly- it feels like there should be one more line, or something... ah, oh well. |
 Snickle-Gigger 2006-04-08 . chapter 1Beautiful.
^_^ |
 goat_song 2006-04-08 . chapter 1 wow, I really like this! Usually I don't like it when people write 300+ words over very little action, but stuff happened here - food got cooked, dishes got washed - so it didn't feel like babbling. Felt like people becoming more comfortable with each other in a domestic setting, which is an adorable thing to see for V and Evey :)
Also, I like Evey's looking at "the line of his shoulders" and considering why he jokes and such. Very good call! I mean, what else are you gonna look at when the other guy's in a mask, right? |