Brilliantly written!

Great story, can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update again soon.

lol, poor Dobby.

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I loved this... Poor Narcissa...

I just loved this... How dramatic...

I loved this...

Wow... This was striking... Amazing...

I just loved this...

A little fight for the little boys... How cute... Lol, I loved it

I loved this...poor Narcissa...

I just loved that beginning...

So sad for Narcissa, who apparently wanted more children but just couldn't. I don't get why Lucius would feel a need to run to someone else when his wife is suffering. A true man wants to abate his wife's suffering, not add to it. Sorry for the complaints, Lucius was better in this chapter, but he seems determined to compress his emotions and be a jerk anyway.

Thanks for updating

It was very much appericated...

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About your ? in the review reply. I could tell that Anais and Lucuis didn't sleep together in that chapter. I was wondering if they sleep together before though. I knew that he cheated on Narissa with her though. For some reason though Narissa seemed like a mean person to Lucius, now I can see why with him cheating on her.

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I am curious though, is Lucius and Narissa married out of love? Or out of an arranged marriage or something of that sort?

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This chapters sad though. I can't believe Narissa can't have anymore children. That just sucks. I imagine she'll be all over Draco now seeing as he is her only child. Though she could accept Leo as her son as well, then she'd at least have two sons. . .

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Can't wait for the next chapter! I'll review again after its posted!

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Great job by the way!

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Actually seriously not, its very sad- but I'm just SO ecstatic to see Lucius and Narcissa communicating, and being honest with each other. Horrible about the baby though :( The emotion was wonderful in this chapter.

Loved the fast update, too!