This was interesting, I like the poetry sketches.

This is a great story. I love the way you incorporated the revised version of the nursery rhyme! It's a very well-written story and I really enjoyed reading it. Lovely!

I used to flatter myself that this fandom and stories were the best ever. I can see now it's not. I'm over L. M. Montgomery, moved pass such sentimentally boring fare. But... This story is good.

One word: I don't like this fandom, but I don't mind if other people do. Naturally.

It's simply wonderful! The nursery rhyme is especially funny. I also like your way of leaving the ending to the reader's imagination.