Ouch, that was so sad it actually hurt. I mean stick a knife in me and twist why don't you. It was really good though despite how sad it is.

oh my God thats sad. i want to cry i LOVE sora and tai together. it was cute but i need to read happier things! keep up the good work anyway :)

Well before the last paragraph I was going to say, "Hm, like the snapshot in time, very sweet."

And then I read that, and my heart sunk, and I felt for poor, poor Taichi. Very depressing really, but beautifully written and very sweet. Very Tai. Bravo.

this makes me want to cry...very well written!

I think you should have placed a little more of a description... but you did get the point across. I loved it... Hey could you check out my stuff when you get a chance? LaterZ!

that was good but you could have put more decription and feeling in it though.
Good effort!
Keep writing.
xx-bye-xx

Aw. :( That was really good. Great job.

nya..

Very lovely. ^^ I like this second-person style...

It's good, but the second-person style is just plain odd.