Wow...just...wow...I mean...Good job kid.

Excellent job, you did not disappoint. That's how I would imagine Billie woul think and act.

i have read ALL of your stories. I LOVE THEM

Thank you - that was great, perfect complement to the first chapter. It really made things clearer to me also. When I read the first chapter I was thinking the whole cemetery bit was in Van's head - now I understand. Still think it would be good to get Billie's view, but I understand if it's too hard.

Excellent second chapter, Ice Bear. Perfect follow up.

That was really good. I like how you tied so many of the episodes in to Van's recollections - kind of his Fastlane life flashing before his eyes. It would be very cool if you did Deaq's point of view and why not Billie too, for that matter?

Excellent narrative, Ice Bear. I'm looking forward to part 2, Deaq's POV.