The story, thus far is not bad. Good pacing and dialouge. The on nagging thing I've noticed is the amount of times charactes say each others names in conversations. If you were in a room alone with a fround you wouldn't constantly say their name at the end of each sentence. It would get really annoying and your frined would probably slap you. I mean I haven read the whole thing but that is something you want to avoid.

This is a really good fic! I loved reading it... even if it's a bit gloomy and dark at the beginning... u did a great job in the dialogs... everyone seemed *real*... i mean everything was characteristic for every character (maybe not jack crying but it's a fanfic!)..

anyway i really enjoyed it... thanx for posting

AnG...

bye

Great story!

Great job! Great storyline - loved how you worked Jack's turmoil with dealing with his captivity by Ba'al into a story with the aftereffects of Sam's having a second symbiote die in her. Great Sam-whump, too. I love stories that show that Carter is strong enough to take it (usually it's only the guys that get to show us thier super-strong internal fortitude.

Few things:

1) if this is done, please change the status.

2) EXCELLENT story.

3) I don't think they've shone people getting eletricuted on the show before...there was that time in South America, but they never ACTUALLY showed Daniel and Dr. Lee getting tortured, just the effects.

4) Nice banter.

5) I loved it.

6) ...There is no six.

7) If there's no six, then I don't think there can be a seven either...

haha go carter! and janet, girl power hehe good story.

lol nice chapter ;)

aw, that is soo sweet. no more scary jack ! just SJ gd gd:)

Thought I would tell you here too: This fic traumatized me quite a bit. I had to keep minmizing the window, then coming back to it. Very good, indeed!

go sam! noo! watch the branch. whats gona hit them next? (no pun intented lol) good chapter

ah! what is jack doing? didnt hammond or someone debrief him, before they left on what he missed? well written though

what did he see? quick next chapter!

Update quick - leave us hanging like that oh my oh my! Great beginning!

Fear? He's afraid of her...um...six?

Got me well and truly hooked.

Hurry, okay?

Thanks, Beverly

I am most definitely hooked. Great beginning. :)

Was looking for a good solid Sam-fic earlier today and found myself rereading your earlier fic "Getting To Know You". What a great Sam-fic. It wouldn't let me leave another review... so I thought I'd put it hear :)

Great to read your posts over at the SaGC thread, too.

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