Evil..pure evil. Cliffhanger like that...oh... You better update soon!

Great story, took yr advice and followed you to this fic. So far you haven't disapointed me - to be honest, you probably never will. You're just too good!

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Aw, from light to angst. Well done though. Hope Dean will be okay. Big mysterious light, hmm. Oh wait, it was one of the jocks self-immolating, right? Have a great weekend, and I'll be looking forward to the update :)

Argh! How can you leave us there for the WHOLE weekend (plus the rest of this week..) I think the mix of humor/drama is just right, it helps show that the boys like to have fun and live as normally as possible WHEN they can. I still find it creepy that all this groundhog stuff exists...

heh heh -'Dixie chicks'.

That was the most comical beating i've ever had the pleasure of reading.

I love all of your descriptions/similes/metaphors, like:

"A group of five or six guys – big guys, solid as Scottish oatmeal"

"that stupid toque was a piece of shit, wouldn’t have kept Angelina Jolie hot."

"grieving in their own Neanderthal way"

"Like an incendiary bomb, something she’d seen on CNN’s Iraq coverage, a huge white light overcame the puny headlights."

Also, I enjoyed the hot chocolate line.

Great job. Loved it. Catch ya on the flip side.

Really interesting story. I visited that website, and I must say those giant Phils are somewhat scary and disturbing :) I like the way you drop little details here and there, like "...colourful banners and large posters advertising the Raise-a-Reader program and the Mom n’ Tots storytime series." among other ones. Sam and Dean are in character and the mystery is involving. I'll definitely be looking forward to the next chapter. Have a great day :)

And the plot thickens. I like the combination of the cold weather (which reminds me of The Lion, The Witch, and the Wardrobe; always winter and never Christmas) and the boys burning up; the juxtaposition of fire and ice. And the library scene was hilarious. A groundhog on the loose, Dean in the middle of it all, five-year-old boys in rapture.

Lol! This is great, especially with Dean feeding Phil. How did he even get in there anyway? You're doing a good job of mixing the seriousness of the situation, with the hilarity of the entire town. Keep up the good work!

Oh, I LOVE it. You've taken something, cute, small, and furry and turned into something totally sinister. Excellent job. Catch ya on the flip side.

Very cool. Catch ya on the flip side.

Great start!

Localized winter. Got the inspiration from looking outdoors, eh? And tourist traps... They're all terrible, and all the same, aren't they, just with different kitsch. Anyways, it's an interesting start.

Does the town really look like that? *lol*