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BitchSlapBarbie
2008-06-16
ch 1,
abuseaww, very cute. JD/COX used to squick me so much, but it's grown on me as this is just too adorable. and i agree with you, there IS a lot more to it than just hot sex (though, i'm not complaining about That either)...ahem...
Bells of Tomorrow
2008-04-07
ch 1,
abuseI like how you incorporated the grief counselor's five stages into that relationship. Very clever. Good writing!
anime-wolf-lucky
2008-04-07
ch 1,
abusewow ^^

just awesome
Paige Halliwell
2007-10-21
ch 1,
abuseBeautifully structured and very well written.
Stella
2007-08-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseI loved this! I usually don't think much about JD/Cox, but this was great! And the way you used those five stages in My five Stages was great! And Are we talking about jordan wasn't bad at all either! Love, Stella
Flying On My Own
2007-06-10
ch 1,
abuseI like it. I think it's really good...
Wendy Walker
2007-06-07
ch 1,
abuseSex before kissing?

Canon lines?

Slash?!

Very nicely done.
dirtyprettything
2007-05-14
ch 1,
abuseThis was adorable.
Forgotten Fairytale
2007-04-02
ch 1,
abuseAW! All I gotta say! ;P
Elise Davidson
2007-03-18
ch 1,
abuseDefinitely one of the best Scrubs fics I've read since I started the fandom. I never get tired of this one because it's powerful and intense without being OOC or too detailed. Some details are just best left up to the mind, and you've accomplished that beautifully. You've build a wonderful relationship between the two without saying much at all. And the five stages of grief are an excellent way to describe their relationship, from either point of view in the long run. Job well done!
xxElisexx
purerandomness
2007-02-12
ch 1,
abuseIve read this story so many times i dont even feel the need to tell you how much i love. This story is just perfection. There is only one thing that ever so slightly irks me that i felt like bringing to you attention In the 'bargaining' paragraph when it says 'I mean, the doctor had hugged him while J.D was still seated. Legs inched in between his and chest against his in the process.' Your out of contex or whatever when you say 'I mean' thats turning it into 1st person even though its third. So maybe you could change it into something like 'In his(J.D's) defence' Im serious that the ONLY thing and its so small i didnt even notice it until after the like first five times i read it. I idolize this story- please fix it? Ill give you a cookie!

sincerly,
pureradomness
Marie Terensky
2007-01-23
ch 1,
abusebeautiful
Momo and the Muses
2007-01-12
ch 1,
abuseyum.
Purplerains
2007-01-08
ch 1,
abuse! That is from my favorite episode that initiated the JD Slash in my mind, oh, I LOVED THAT! All your episode things were ones I love, your genius, you know that?
Mondeo
2006-12-07
ch 1,
abuseThat was amazing, I loved it. It was a very cool concept and I think a very realistic portayal of their relationship.
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