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| happyhooligan2001 2007-08-28 ch 1,  | abuseI had to read it twice. First from one woman's point of view and then from the other's. I loved Audrey's reaction to seeing Jack with a woman that she feels doesn't deserve him but we all know that Chloe truly does. |
| sej1986 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseWow, you totally had me there! This is brilliant! |
| ms metaphor 2007-02-07 ch 1, | abuseWow, you totally had me. I didn't see that coming. Very well done. |
| Sutzina Zion 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuseHaha... I have to admit, the ending surprised me. I like that. It takes a good author to keep me guessing. Usually I can tell what's going to happen, but you... blew me right out of the water. |
| Muskoka Girl 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHAHA! I love it! At first I thought it was Chloe who was shopping. Adorable! |
| scoob2222 2006-04-13 ch 1, | abuseOMG! I don't know how I missed this story before. I thought it was awesome that way you weren't sure who it was until the very end. Glad you liked Give. Really cool to see Audrey vulnerable that way. |
| thecrystalkey 2006-04-09 ch 1, | abuseSee, now you made me feel sorry for Audrey. Although that may be because on my first read through I spent most of it trying to imagine Chloe getting anything out of shopping therapy. Heh. Tricky you. Well done. |
| KatLilly86 2006-04-09 ch 1, | abuseWhew! *wipes her brow in relief* I thought Jack was w/ Audrey for a second. :) |
| staceyjames 2006-04-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love Jack and Chloe together - just made for each other :) |