THIS WAS GREAT

Would it be possible to beg for another story in sequel to this one? Between the Centaurs wanting Ranma to return and the Giant situation not to mention the possibility for Harry to get a position at Hogwarts you do still have the door open for it even if you aren't certain of how you would want it to go at the moment.

Another thing to consider. Just because the Fiancée mess was resolved with the loss of Ranma's family name doesn't mean the rivals or worse the Kunos are completely gone. I see allot of potential if Kodachi had a child who ended up receiving a Hogwarts acceptance letter.

Heck just working out ways for futures to go for everyone else could create some fun possibilities too. After all what happened with U-chan? Is she still in business?

Ranma has powerful friends and allies in the Amazons and Saffron but they are rather remote if trouble should come to call. It's not like Ranma can hide the fact of being in England and what if Ryouga, Taro, Ryu or any others are still nursing their grudges to come along and make a fuss?

Anti-Muggle protection or not they could end up making an interesting situation.

I hope you consider it. Heck I'd also like to find out if you Harry ends up taking his family the Weasley way. So many children in that family...

There are still quite a few places in this fic with Typos but it is one of the most fun Ranma/Harry fics out there. I really hope you will consider a Hogwarts continuation.

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Great story!

Your story's been keeping me busy for quite a while. Thank you for that! I must say, this is the second H/R crossover I've read and though I was worried of ranma being written in her girl form, I find myself enjoying her character as much as I would any other, if not more. Also, next chapter being the last right now, I'm really hoping you haven't stopped writing. On a side note,I admire the way you balanced the different parts of the story, the fighting, the relationships. Hmm, I wonder why Harry didn't just show a memory of the dragon to Ranma though, but you may have your own reasons for omiting that.I love your story and cant wait for more! Please, don't stop writing.

This was a very sweet story.
I was a little leery of reading it when I first saw the description, as I'm not a huge fan of Yaoi stories, but this wasn't one at all. I really did enjoy it immensely, and I thank you for that. keep up teh good job.

Very very well written. An excellent story throughout. I have never liked Harry Potter material in the least fanfic or otherwise however your writing did what I thought impossible, make that universe tolerable and interesting. The relationship that you had between Ranma and Harry developed at a very nice clip, and the problems experienced in their growing relationship were done very well indeed. Ranma's relationship with Harry's daughter also seemed quite natural. You wrote a amazing piece of fiction here. It was excellent.

I only really have two problems with it. First, I think that more characters from Ranma's past could have been interesting. Not knowing what happened to Ryouga, Ukyou, Konastsu, Nabiki (well at least not in a lot of detail), or Ranma's parents could have been quite interesting. This information could have been done in the end of the fic, and it would have been nice to know in the universe you created here. Ryouga especially would have been interesting to see how he would react to Ranma now. I would think he would have gone to visit Akane too. Secondly, I wish you had written the epilogue to a couple years in the future where they might have had children of their own...Would've been a nicer more complete ending, although your ending was satisfying enough as it was.

I don't know what all the arguments on your review pages about this being Yaoi are...He's a girl now increasingly in mind and definitely in body. They're engaging in a traditional male/female relationship. That's not Yaoi in the least.

This is without doubt one of the best fics I've read. Well written throughout, excellent realistic character development, and very well written dialogue. Felt a bit rushed at the end, but all in all a superb work. I'm amazed that I liked anything touched by Harry Potter, something that had no chance of occurring but for your superb writing. Thanks for sharing the story.

Shortest answer:
It's yaoi (slash, whatever) because Ranma self-identifies as male.
Or rather, that's why it's yaoi masquerading as het.

It's not that I have a problem with girl-Ranma hooking up with a guy (even though I'd really have appreciated some warning about it, and I'd honestly prefer it was male-Ranma hooking up with a guy if you must), but Ranma self-identifies as male. Thus, yaoi.

In my opinion.

You're a fantastic author, with a lot of talent and the drive to use it properly.
The character development is excellent - this is the only story I've read yet where I can actually see Ranma overcoming sixteen years of conditioning and falling in love with a man.
The plotline flows smoothly and the ending is inspiring and thought provoking.
Well done. Keep writing.

A very nice story. I think my favorite part was Cheli. She was most refreshing and a wonderful spoiler for the rest of the cast, (of two).

For all those crumy stories with bad plots and poor spelling, I'll throw you this bone. I don't waste my time on them, sometimes stopping before a full chapter. Your story I have been continuing to read and fully plan to read your others as well. I don't comment every chapter, but thats partly because I came to this story late, and print it out to read away from the computer.

Thank you for your efforts they are appreciated.

Ranma never loses, and I can understand why it would take sixteen years for him to understand that caring for someone else (of whatever gender) isn't losing.
Watching the last few episodes of video released, I could easily see Ranma turning into Genma, with Akane egging him on. Heartbreaking to see him giving up honor just to scrape out a little piece of -- not sure what he has with Akane?
I liked your story very much. Thank You!

I cannot recall whether I have submitted a review of this particular fic previously so I figure I might as well do so now.

The short of it is that this is one of the better (if not one of the best) works to be put out in the Ranma fandom (and probably the Harry Potter one as well) in a while. It's one of the only ones that I felt inclined to read more than once and was written with an actual stopping-point in mind. The open-ended nature of some of the questions at the end do not really detract from enjoyment of the story any.

The plotline strikes me as being particularly well thought out and the characterizations are done in a way so as to make them believable. When one of the characters shifts behavior there is generally enough of a major event present in the story to make it fit in with the flow of the plot rather than sticking out from it.

On a different note, some individuals seem to feel like bringing up in their reviews on the issue that they seem to feel the story deserves a "slash" rating warning. I would tend to disagree.

When dealing with a series where things like species and gender are mutable one has to preserve a certain suspension of disbelief. Even moreso when acknowledging that one of the "male" characters has spent the last sixteen years of the story's plotline as a female.

That said, the story does not seem to fit into the group of "ranmachan" stories that move rather quickly from "Well, damn. I'm a girl now." to "Let's screw like bunnies!" (Of particular note is the fact that they still hadn't as of the end of the story.) It's not rushed. It's not forced. It's not having the characters behave in ways that seem inappropriate, given the ways they are developed throughout the course of events. In short, it does not resemble a story that would require any sort of "slash" rating at all.

It is, of course, not without its faults. There are a number of (on the whole small) errors scattered throughout. These are mostly spellcheck gone horribly wrong, if memory serves. Something that could be fixed if the mood struck, but nothing particularly necessary.

Like many works of fan fiction the main characters are not the characters of the characters of the works that they are pulled from but rather bear the name and what characteristics the author chooses to give them. When done poorly, this may result in a character losing any suspension of disbelief that the readers may grant it. This is not so here. It is (mostly) offset by the time gap in between the time in which the original works were set and the "present time" of the story.

At any rate, Thank you for providing an enjoyable read.

You know, if you are going to make the two main characters gay, you might as well go ahead and put a slash tag up on your story or something. Just as a courtesy, you understand.

This is probably one of the most original HP crossover fics I've read in a long time, and a completed one at that! Which makes it doubly amazing! I really wish there were more to this because the ending was just a little abrupt. I didn't even realize it ended until I read your AN. >

Great story. You did it quiet well, and the interaction with the characters over having lots of action was refreshing in a story, but the few fight scenes you did do were really good. I have to agree with another reviewer, I can't really provide much constructive criticism. I wouldn't say there were a lot of grammar mistakes, but there were missing or jumbled words in some places. It looks like you were thinking faster then you type so some words were left out. I do it often lol. Aside from that, it would be cool if you wrote in that epologue you hinted at. Would be nice to see some of the loose ends tied, but considering you said you liked the fact some things went "unexplained" I won't be expecting it. Anyway, great story, I enjoyed reading it.