Because I was very much like I am today, only worse."

[Issue: he never really confesses that he was bad to start with. Except when he’s taking pride in being evil, but that’s a present-tense thing. All in all a minor note]

"She was a foreigner,a

[Spacing]

Well, that was short and I think too much of it hinged on knowing about a crossover character I didn’t (whoever this ‘Lum-chan’ is), having that noted in the summary or pre-chapter author’s note would have been helpful. Regardless, it was still a fair story.

You know, you're the only one to delve into what Happosai would have been like in the past. I imagined that he'd been Miroku from Inuyasha and had gone into depression when Sango would die somehow.

-JWchan

That was quite a twist. Your right the timeframe

is wrong but it fits perfectly otherwise.

nice fic even i have to admit that it all fits i never thought that happosi could have a heart but this is not much ooc

I really liked this one! Which surprised the hell out of me, because I generally dislike Happosai.

Oh my.

WOW! AMAZING! I really *really* *really* love this

Umm, not bad. But who's Lum-chan? Me not get it?