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Tsuki the Ryuujin no Miko
2008-06-25 . chapter 1
akito is a girl and sorry if thats a spoiler.
Funabisenu
2007-12-30 . chapter 1
from what i read so far it seems really cool!
liobi's curse
2007-12-08 . chapter 1
um... you do know that akito's a girl, right?
ShihanaAmaya
2007-10-12 . chapter 1
Me likey it.

Lol.
Update?
Danimals21
2007-06-11 . chapter 1
you should continue! i lyk this chapter!
Erika Strider
2007-06-08 . chapter 1
I found a couple errors in this fic, but nothing too bad. For one thing, Itachi was... Thirteen, I think, when he killed his clan. Sasuke was eight.

Another, is that a Sohma must be born with a Spirit of the Zodiac, I think... They just don't get it when someone with the spirit dies.

And if you use -san, -kun, -sama, etc... Can you say Itachi's name 'Uchiha Itachi' instead of 'Itachi Uchiha'? It just seems to fit in a bit more then saying their name in the westren order. And I don't think you need to put translations for certain words down. People who read Manga/watch Anime should know some basic Japanese words, like 'Hai' is 'Yes', 'Iie' is 'No', 'Nani' is 'What', etc. The more complicated words should have a translation though, like how you described what Daifuku was.

All around, though, creative fan fiction. Though, about Konoha, wouldn't that be in a different dimension or something? Since the entire Ninja country is as big a Asia? (Maybe even bigger, seeing as the Snow Country from the First Naruto Movie is across the sea)
BindingLight*
2007-01-03 . chapter 1
i'm just plain confuzed...
shriveled.up.heart
2006-08-21 . chapter 1
Interesting story! I liked it a lot! I was wondering is Koji Tohru, Yuki, and Kyo's age? Also I'm surprised no one reviewed your fic. I hope you still plan on posting more.
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