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Vistic
2008-05-04 . chapter 4
-falls in from the roof-
lol XD oh em gee!
I can't stop lauging!!
This whole fic is so cracked up!
I really want you to update this but since it has been practically two years I don't think you will. But I hope you best of luck on your crazy stories.
-jumps out of window from the 5oth floor and lands on feet running away-
waterdragon34912
2007-01-29 . chapter 1
OMG! That was so filled of crack, I LOVED IT! XD It made me laugh so freaking hard!
Nobody
2006-08-24 . chapter 4
You know what's awesome about this fic?
IT MAKES NO SENSE! =D
I love it, update soon!!
crazysquirl
2006-08-02 . chapter 4
hehehehehe
this is the funiest thing ever
Kazeri
2006-07-31 . chapter 4
LMAO. That was so funny!
Let's name it Seven! xD
Update soon please!!
Scylla Desdemonia Ophelia
2006-07-31 . chapter 4
HELL yeah revolving doors are a **. ANY electronic door friggen' creeps me out. INCLUDING ELEVATOR DOORS. YOU NEVER KNOW WHEN THEY ARE GOING TO CLOSE ON YOU! -Shifty eyes-
WindOfDancingFlames
2006-07-31 . chapter 4
Xemnas, you may go shoot Luxord.

Xemnas: Oh, happy day!

Very nice chappie, me likey the way you put Axel out of the story. It's ingenious!

Until next time,

~WindOfDancingFlames

XD
chicken.stir.fry
2006-07-31 . chapter 3
-reads chappie-

...

WHA?
chicken.stir.fry
2006-07-31 . chapter 2
this chapter had the same effect on me as getting a muffin chucked at my head...
nightmare car
2006-07-31 . chapter 4
heres my idea for Axel getting out of the door!

Xemnas: well how'd you get back

Axel: well it went like this

([flashback])

Axel: LEMME OUTTA HERE! (banging on the door trying to et out when a random person walks up and takes the stick out which sends the door spinning and Axel flying into a glass window at the top of the building across the street)

lady in the girls bathroom: (screams and beats intruder up)

Axel: (comes wobbleing out of the girls bathroom which happens to be at the top of a tall stair well) ow.. .. uh oh (he begins to fall down the stairs) OOF! OWW! PAIN! (continues to fall down the stairs until he reaches the bottom of a 12 story building) OH-HO MY BACK!

([end flashback])
chicken.stir.fry
2006-07-31 . chapter 1
that,
was the DEFINITION
of LMAO funny
Miss Sketchbook
2006-07-31 . chapter 4
LOL!! THAT WAS HILARIOUS! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! XD
-me
slyfan123
2006-07-31 . chapter 3
the first chapter was hilarious, except for the ending... and the other chapters...
Chiewana Lyons
2006-07-23 . chapter 1
Alex- Forget what I said about the kinky sex.
Marluxia- (Whines) Why not!?
Alex- BECAUSE I SAID SO DAMMIT!
Axel- Besides, who would want to have kinky sex with a guy who likes PINK??
Ximek- I would.
Alex- o_O
Axel- x_x
Marluxia- ^_^
Chiewana Lyons
2006-07-23 . chapter 3
have marluxia and demyx have kinky sex in the next chapter.
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