 Vistic 2008-05-04 . chapter 4-falls in from the roof-
lol XD oh em gee!
I can't stop lauging!!
This whole fic is so cracked up!
I really want you to update this but since it has been practically two years I don't think you will. But I hope you best of luck on your crazy stories.
-jumps out of window from the 5oth floor and lands on feet running away- |
 waterdragon34912 2007-01-29 . chapter 1 OMG! That was so filled of crack, I LOVED IT! XD It made me laugh so freaking hard! |
 Nobody 2006-08-24 . chapter 4 You know what's awesome about this fic?
IT MAKES NO SENSE! =D
I love it, update soon!! |
 crazysquirl 2006-08-02 . chapter 4hehehehehe
this is the funiest thing ever |
 Kazeri 2006-07-31 . chapter 4LMAO. That was so funny!
Let's name it Seven! xD
Update soon please!! |
 Scylla Desdemonia Ophelia 2006-07-31 . chapter 4HELL yeah revolving doors are a **. ANY electronic door friggen' creeps me out. INCLUDING ELEVATOR DOORS. YOU NEVER KNOW WHEN THEY ARE GOING TO CLOSE ON YOU! -Shifty eyes- |
 WindOfDancingFlames 2006-07-31 . chapter 4Xemnas, you may go shoot Luxord.
Xemnas: Oh, happy day!
Very nice chappie, me likey the way you put Axel out of the story. It's ingenious!
Until next time,
~WindOfDancingFlames
XD |
 chicken.stir.fry 2006-07-31 . chapter 3-reads chappie-
...
WHA? |
 chicken.stir.fry 2006-07-31 . chapter 2this chapter had the same effect on me as getting a muffin chucked at my head... |
 nightmare car 2006-07-31 . chapter 4heres my idea for Axel getting out of the door!
Xemnas: well how'd you get back
Axel: well it went like this
([flashback])
Axel: LEMME OUTTA HERE! (banging on the door trying to et out when a random person walks up and takes the stick out which sends the door spinning and Axel flying into a glass window at the top of the building across the street)
lady in the girls bathroom: (screams and beats intruder up)
Axel: (comes wobbleing out of the girls bathroom which happens to be at the top of a tall stair well) ow.. .. uh oh (he begins to fall down the stairs) OOF! OWW! PAIN! (continues to fall down the stairs until he reaches the bottom of a 12 story building) OH-HO MY BACK!
([end flashback]) |
 chicken.stir.fry 2006-07-31 . chapter 1that,
was the DEFINITION
of LMAO funny |
 Miss Sketchbook 2006-07-31 . chapter 4LOL!! THAT WAS HILARIOUS! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! XD
-me |
 slyfan123 2006-07-31 . chapter 3the first chapter was hilarious, except for the ending... and the other chapters... |
 Chiewana Lyons 2006-07-23 . chapter 1 Alex- Forget what I said about the kinky sex.
Marluxia- (Whines) Why not!?
Alex- BECAUSE I SAID SO DAMMIT!
Axel- Besides, who would want to have kinky sex with a guy who likes PINK??
Ximek- I would.
Alex- o_O
Axel- x_x
Marluxia- ^_^ |
 Chiewana Lyons 2006-07-23 . chapter 3 have marluxia and demyx have kinky sex in the next chapter. |