That was aesome... This tory kicks **. ^~^

hey there! although it was kinda cruel at some parts i really liked ur story! =)

amazing story, awesome graphics

good ** story i liked it nice work

i've waited for your last cuople of chapters and yes it was hell worth it! i enjoyed them i i've read feel the pain partB. good storyies please keep up the good work.
love
always michelle

real good story. loved the ending:)

omg omg thats all i could say no not sammy

Great story, keep up your writing! You're very creative!

Excellent first fic. I really enjoyed following it! Thanks for sharing it.

So glad you finally came back to this. Interesting out of body experience! He was gone a whole hour? Yikes, it's a wonder that Dean didn't do something drastic. Really interesting concept. Maybe you can pull a story AFTER this happens and have Sam recall bits of the 'other world' as they work on a gig. Just a thought.

Good work!

:D
Caroline

Woh, very kool, the head-popping-off scene was gruesome, but...nice...er if thats the word 4 it, haha. Like how u kept Dean the same and protective. Its what got me in2 the show. XP Thanks 4 writing this. WRITE MORE STUFF
XD

You did a wonderful job on your first fan fiction. I loved the story. It was great.

hey loved the story and I can't wait to read version B keep up the great work! :)

Hey loved it... I'm a closet happy ending junkie... as evidenced by my own fic - these boys get so much grief from TETIK that the least we can do is after angst-ifying them for our own satisfaction we give them a moment's peace. Nicely done.

Write another one... (just a suggestion.)

sifi

Wow! I love your writing style and ideas. I was really really impressed. I'm writing my own first fanfic at the moment and I can only hope that it comes anywhere close to being that good! Love the whole "Version B" idea as well - I'm really intrigued and looking forward to reading it.