This was quite sad. I've never thought of Yazoo that way before (as being "imperfect," thus why Kadaj was created) but it strikes very true. I've added this to a C2 community - I hope you don't mind! :)

Aw poor angsty Yazoo.

Aww. . . That made sad, Yazoo is one of my favorite characters, and it depresses me to see him so upset and confused.

You did a wonderful job, I really enjoyed reading this.

Ki Ravenblood

poor yazoo!
ASOTA

That was beautiful. And very thoughtful--I liked that insight and the way you expressed it- that a person's imperfection can be exactly what makes them so valuable.

Aw. Man, i just want to hug him now. Poor Yazoo. Cool story, just amazing.

Oh, nice. I love the trio, and you gave a good view of what their life could have been like BEFORE AC. I really liked it, but I'm also a rabit fan of angst, tragedy and humor, so don't mind me :)

-A

Col! Me love Yazo! I think he's cute all weak and fragile, but I wish he would like it better. Me feel sorry for him. Cool story!

Wonderful! Simply wonderful! A little bit non-canon, but that's okay. Yazoo is rarely portrayed like this, good job.

cool! i love all villains! hehe i just call the three the shm short for silver haired men. anyway love the story a lot!

It says that this story was comlete...

Wow...I loved the way you portray Yazoo. You like him a lot?

He's like the middle child who never really gets as much respect like the first child and as much attention as the last child. Poor thing.

Keep writing.

Is your fic totally going to be about him and his feelings towards Jenova and his two brothers?