Reviews for First Catch & Others

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chibi-aiichan 2008-08-13 ch 17,	abusesob sob... kill akito! gr!! ayatori forevah!
loretta537 2007-09-22 ch 17,	abusethis is a good story. I like the story line but i dont like how it jumps around from past (high school), present (seducing hatori, going to paris, getting beat up by akito) and future (they're finally together, buying a house, living in the house). I would like to find out how they go from hatori being mad at aya and akito beating him up, to the two of them being together and buying a house. please update soon.
X 2007-08-06 ch 17, anon.	abuseIt's such a good story; you have to continue it.
Nostalgic5947 2007-07-13 ch 17,	abuseAh, the angst is pretty and colorful (heh, odd thought, isn't it?) =D Anyway, I think you posted this on LJ and I started to read some of it there (Hatoyame Comm) so this... Wow, it's so much LONGer than I thought it might be. XD Well, you'll update soon, yes? I love where this is going and can't wait to see just WHERE you take it. Arg, Akito... I want to bash her for what she did to Aaya (I love his hair!), but, sadly, she's the only femal character of FB that I LIKE--other than Mine cuz she's so sweet and devoted to helping Aaya. So I CAN't really bash her... 0_o;; Is that normal? W.e UPDATE! pokes u favs
Fangirl 2007-03-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseSorry to say this, but I believe Ayame means Iris (the flower) in japanese.. try googling it.. you'll see xD anyways nice story
Sweetciel 2007-02-03 ch 17,	abuseI love this story. It is so well written and descriptive without being boringly descriptive. I love the writers. Excellent job ladies! Just one question...Where's the next chapter? That wasn't really the end..was it?
Micayasha 2006-09-22 ch 1,	abuseActually, the technical word for lilly in Japanese is Sayuri. Where did you acquire the definition of lilly for Ayame?
littlefiction 2006-08-17 ch 17,	abuseHarsh. A very well written and properly unpleasant chapter. I admit, I am looking forward to the fluff though.
hyper-writer14 2006-08-15 ch 17,	abuseI forget..does Hatori still forget that happened that night? Ah, whatever. And Akito's jab at the snake thing...that was actually pretty funny.
Adi88 2006-08-15 ch 17,	abuseUPDATE! Yay. Calm. Anyway... such lovely angst. Maybe you could keep alternating? Chapter of fluff, chapter of angst...? I loved Shigure's interaction, and Akito's hissy fit - as well as Ayame's attempts to avoid it and his pride in being beaten up by a female. So him. Plus, the end. Like, the last three paragraphs. I don't know, something special... Unspoken things or something. Me likey.
yAOi-aI lOVer 2006-08-14 ch 17,	abuseyay! another chapter. hope you update soon.
Pandora de Romanus 2006-07-20 ch 16,	abuseJust so cute! And it's such a long time since you've wrote a new chapter! This one is really cute, really Ayame and I'll be waiting for the next... After all Blue Remembrance is still lingering without sollution.
Adi88 2006-07-19 ch 16,	abuseOh my dear sweet Akito. That is so cute. I love it all over. (Few unnecessary words making a sentence or two read funny, but hey, whassat in the face of such adoreableness?) Making Aya taller than Hatori is so brilliant... I dunno, kind of disorrienting and very fun to imagine. The entire second sentence needs to be cut out and framed. Also, for some simplistic reason, calling it a "fruitless" endeavor made me happy. Fruits Basket... "No fruit for Buffy." Mn... and everything about Aya's hugs and chess-playing, shopping habits, zoo trips, and kisses. Wonderful.
littlefiction 2006-07-19 ch 16,	abuseSo sweet! Such wonderful fluff, I love it! So brilliantly written from begining to end!
Its Good to be a Myth 2006-07-19 ch 16, anon.	abuseOh thats cute. A gentler story to make up for the angst of before. Wonderful, and please keep writing!

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