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| FluffySmarts 2006-11-10 ch 1,  | abuseyou really need to write a sequel to this and have them get together! message me if you do! i totally would want to read it! have you thought abt getting a site at so you can put all your poems up there? LIZ |
| YaoiYaoiYeah 2006-06-30 ch 1, | abusesob...so sad. Poor girl. Unreturned love is never easy to deal with, but so many of us are dealing with it daily. |
| K. L. Bloodfang 2006-05-19 ch 1, | abuseOkay,another well written poem. I'm sorry if I haven't made much sense o spelt something wrong, but I woke up 5 minutes again and my brain is still half way asleep. |
| sylphstarwind 2006-05-05 ch 1, | abuseDude, that's screwed up! They both love each other, but they don't say anything. Stupid Hermione, getting married to someone she doesn't love in that way. Nice twist from the other poem. Still too short and not very artistic, though. I mean, you could use more metaphors and imagery and whatnot, since it IS a poem. But I hate to end it with a criticism, so...it was still pretty good. |
| Burikko 2006-04-27 ch 1, | abuseAww, how sad. u.u This captures her feelings perfectly. It paints a picture and catches the attention of the reader. Awsome job. |
| Slytherin Fox 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abuseNo one ever thinks about Harry and Hermione as a couple but you never know - maybe! Anyway, I really liked your poem! |
| loskie 2006-04-12 ch 1, | abuseUgh! Unbelievably angsty for true love. And to know that they could have had something, together even! Good piece to go with the first. It adds that little twist and doesn't take away from what the first succeded in doing. |
| blackolives10 2006-04-12 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! |
| Hatori's Melted Snow 2006-04-09 ch 1, | abusewait...did she love ron or harry? lol |