 ninja-freak13 2007-05-19 . chapter 2L.O.L it's way cool! update! |
 Shadow Fox777 2006-12-11 . chapter 2Well, that was atually, Quite amusing. |
 tsuchikage 2006-11-10 . chapter 2update!
mpre sasor/temari! |
 lordcraven 2006-08-14 . chapter 2 hehehe.. nice story man.. but one mistake... DEIDARA IS A SHE! |
 duziekat 2006-08-10 . chapter 2hmmn never thought of a sasoriXtemari pairing but i like it. great chapter update soon please!! |
 duziekat 2006-08-10 . chapter 1tacos! i like your idea for the story. cools. tacos! will take over the worle with there tacoey goodness!! |
 S.H.L 2006-07-07 . chapter 2Ahahaha! This story is so funny! i like the twist in with Full Metal Alchemist! Cool! Love it. |
 Necal 2006-07-05 . chapter 2...are you on drugs? |
 Amaroq11 2006-07-04 . chapter 2I love this story!! I was cracking up laughing. |
 Itami Yatake 2006-07-03 . chapter 2Yay! The funny in the story keeps coming! ^-^ I love Ed! And Roy! And I love the superstition thing about sneezing...wait...I wanted to ask a question, but its about FMA, and kinda off topic, so I won't... |
 akatsuki-NIN-itachi 2006-06-29 . chapter 2that was freek'n hilarious both chapters were
funny as hell
loved it |
 sasukeandrockleelvr 2006-06-28 . chapter 2OMG! I loved it! and FMA is a great show, one of meh favs, good work I must read more! |
 Fullmidget Alchemist 2006-06-28 . chapter 2Yay! Deidara-ness!
OMFG HE LITERALLY FLIPPED THE BIRD! HILARIOUS CHAPTER!
Update soon, pwease! |
 Yami-Chan.com 2006-06-28 . chapter 2YES!! BWAHAHAHAHAHA! That was perfect! I laughed so hard! ^_^ |
 Sharinganmistress 2006-06-28 . chapter 2Im in love with your story!I swear its so hilarious I love it! Anyway please update soon! |