WHAT THE HELL! Where is the rest of this!
*whimpers*
I really, really want to read the rest of this. Has the writer given it up?
NO!

Would it be horrible of me to ask you to continue this.. it's great

Oh, giddy God, I want the rest of this so much. How could you abandon us like this? Don't you care about what happens to Carl? With his cute little face? And what about VH? He has unresolved issues! I've read this through probably more than a dozen times, I've saved the whole thing to my computer and I seriously read it all the time. And I'm always checking back here, hoping that maybe... And I'm nto alone, lots of people have asked for you to continue this. It's definitely my favourite of all your stories, and my favourite Van Helsing fic ever. Plese! I'm beseeching you. In a beseeching manner. Can you at least tell us what was going to happen? It'd be like taking methadone to ease the craving but at least it would be *something*. Thnks fr ur time :) x

Well seeing as u haven't updated this story in forever according the the updated date i will just say sad it ended w/ no ending and really enjoyed it.

Wow, great plot & formation of the relationship. Hope Carl can escape from the Vatican. Having Velkan appear is certianlly a twist I didn't expect!

*quite thoroughly on the edge of her seat* ... Well? That's it? Oh, please continue this!! I love the way you describe faith, and the conflicts in this story- and how it has a plot besides romantic angst! ;) I really am dying to know what's going on with Gabriel and Carl, and just as I'm beginning to form some theories, BOOM! Velkan! @__@ Please say there's more!

Wow. Just... wow. Good dialogue- /funny/ dialogue- a plot, characters with depth and behaving feasibly; there are not enough fanfics out there (especially for this fandom, which seems to be 95% Mary Sue) which are done so well. Rather surprised it's on the Pit O' Voles, actually.

I see from your profile that this is on hold- fair enough, of course, but I do hope you finish it at some point in the future.

WHY? Please finish this! I find so few VC fics out there T_T

Hope you are going to continue with your story. It's good and can't wait to read more of it. Your a really good writer.

Beautiful chapter. I love how this is going, I can't wait to read more.

Hah! Tokhes! Reminds me of that old movie The Frisco Kid. Has Harrison ford co-star and many tokhes jokes, bit old though. You might want to check it out if you havent already.

All that asside, excelent writing! I love the sympathetic character Daniel and the banter between our two favorite characters! Keep at it!

This is great! Those two aren't having an easy time of it, are they? Poor things. Still, I hope this has a happy ending! It's very well written, and I like the way you've done their emotions. Please update soon, I can't wait to read more!

I just found this story and even though I noticed the last update date was quite a while ago I read it anyway and now I'm addicted so you absolutely must update soon. Must. Must, must, must. Please. I'm dying here.

Anyway, thanks for the great story!

oh, now this is interesting. Well written, with a fascinating premise. THe plot twist at the end of chapter 8 was not what I'd seen coming - very cool. I have been thoroughly enjoying the banter and humour between gabriel and Carl - nicely written adn very in character.

o I love this story so far! So amazingly in character, all of them. The story seems so real, I love the way you've captured everything. Well done. I can't wait to read more, I hope you haven't abandoned this.

hm now who is this Prince? Should I know that name? *shrugs* I'm sure you'll enlighten us. :)Wait...Velkan...The brother? Who was a werewolf? Who died? ...*brain emplodes*