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| ben 2008-02-29 ch 1, anon. | abusethis story is realy bad... you should probs think of a different career... |
| starsamdude 2006-10-21 ch 8, | abuseOK DO YOU LIKE TO KILL PEOPLE I HATE THIS STUPID STORY NOW |
| ShockTreatment 2006-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseYeah, I'm replying again to say yeah it's alrgiht to be a little oc in parodies. I keep reviewing because I feel bad for flaming and taking this story too seriously, I just felt bitchy those days. Sorry, I'll make a real non-flame review. It's odd parody, I think of this as more satire of politics. UThere are some plotholes though, unless this was in some other story, like when did Terra come back and when did this Ash thing come about. It's alright though, but those reviewers who are calling Raven evil and deserves this are rude and I hope you made those reviews up. |
| The Astrology Nerd 2006-04-30 ch 8, | abuseHahahaha! This is... priceless. Love the parody. ~Sorwyn |
| Infamous One 2006-04-22 ch 8, | abuseAnd so the cat is out of the bag at last,thank goodness...I must admit I had to read several chapters more than once to get it.Must be because I'm an old fart... Definately a total kookfest compared to your usual stuff...but that was part of the point,right? |
| Infamous One 2006-04-22 ch 7, | abuseI'm a sucker for musical numbers just like Robin,so I am all sparkly and happy like a twelve year old school girl with a crush,thanks. |
| joe-ashaman 2006-04-18 ch 8, | abuseCongrats on a job well done. Joe Asha'man |
| Zillian 2006-04-18 ch 7, | abuseJeez, you write this so well it's kinda creepy. I have read real stories like this. At least you don't take yourself too seriously with a OMG I HAT YOU ALL EMO ANGSt post. This is a great parody. |
| loveatfirstterra 2006-04-17 ch 7, | abusewait - where did u get that the libertarians like the enviornment - wth? They're further right wing than the Republicans. |
| loveatfirstterra 2006-04-17 ch 3, | abusewaitasecond - libertarian - LaRouche! OMG he brainwashes people into saying that, i've actually done research on him - he ran for president while in jail - its kinda scary what he does, hes tried for prez every time since G HW Bush. |
| Infamous One 2006-04-17 ch 6, | abuseOkay,even though i am privvy to the deadly secret of this fan fiction of disaster...you are so killing me...yet like an auto accident,I find I can not turn away until it will become too late. Like Slade I say to thee..."What the...?" |
| The Dresden Terror 2006-04-16 ch 1, | abuseI am giving a second review because I believe I was too harsh and it was too much like a flame. I do not hate this story, but I don't think it that great and I believe you could do better if you wanted. I do realize this is a parody, but I fail to see the humor. I am sorry for being harsh. |
| Rowlingfan 2006-04-16 ch 6, | abuseOH, SATIRE! You're cruel. |
| AzelmaRoark 2006-04-16 ch 6, | abuse“Sieg Saffron Terrorists,” Slade said evilly. “I'm Russian-ish!” Terra bounced in her seat. “Is that close to German?” “Terra just sit there and look pretty please.” Hehe. Don't worry, babe. I get it. This is amazing and so hysterical. Expect my full review at TGN soon. I seriously think you've found your stride with humor--the last two chapters were fantastic and you're really mastering the biting subtlety that's so necessary for satire (yes, guys--satire). Looking forward to more "ZOMG GUD CHAPPIES LOLZ"! -Azelma :) |
| The Dresden Terror 2006-04-15 ch 6, | abuseIs this suppose to be a political statement, because it's simply showing how arrogant people can be. It's wrong to try and conform someone to your belief and saying their evil for not joining you is wrong. Raven is completely right. Just because she doesn't want to get involved in politics doesn't make her a bad person or un-patriotic. People should be able to show support for the place they come from, because that is where they come from. Raven should win in the end and perhaps beat the crap out of them. The Titans should accept her views since she is their friend, they should've realized by now she was happy before they tried to force this on them. Now I also have to say I hate your story, I'mk usually nice about this stuff and support people, but your story has infuriated me. For one, of how arrogant the other Titans are to Raven, but also how so out of character you wrote everyone! You made Starfire so stupid, she's smart you know, but she's a person in a foreign place with no idea how it works and then there was that thing where she turned her back so badly on Raven. You have also downgraded Slade from a criminal mastermind to a mere thief. You've also messed up the other characters personalities very badly. The Titans wouldn't really turn their back on Raven for such a petty disagreement and they are acting so childish over politics. I also believe your hacking Remix's account for your sick agenda. For one in the first chapter you say this is your first story and Remix has already written several stories which are much better than this so I doubt he would write something like this. Why you haven't gotten caught yet I don't know, but you should feel ashamed of yourself since your dragging Remix's reputation on this site through the mud and if Remix is actually writing this story or supporting it he should I hope he stops it soon. I'm sorry this was so harsh, but this story has burned me to the core. |