omg i loved that so far i love raven cuz im kinda dark like her and i have a worse attitude so yayz

this story is realy bad... you should probs think of a different career...

OK DO YOU LIKE TO KILL PEOPLE I HATE THIS STUPID STORY NOW

Yeah, I'm replying again to say yeah it's alrgiht to be a little oc in parodies. I keep reviewing because I feel bad for flaming and taking this story too seriously, I just felt bitchy those days. Sorry, I'll make a real non-flame review. It's odd parody, I think of this as more satire of politics. UThere are some plotholes though, unless this was in some other story, like when did Terra come back and when did this Ash thing come about. It's alright though, but those reviewers who are calling Raven evil and deserves this are rude and I hope you made those reviews up.

Hahahaha! This is... priceless. Love the parody.

~Sorwyn

And so the cat is out of the bag at last,thank goodness...I must admit I had to read several chapters more than once to get it.Must be because I'm an old fart...
Definately a total kookfest compared to your usual stuff...but that was part of the point,right?

I'm a sucker for musical numbers just like Robin,so I am all sparkly and happy like a twelve year old school girl with a crush,thanks.

Congrats on a job well done.

Joe Asha'man

Jeez, you write this so well it's kinda creepy. I have read real stories like this. At least you don't take yourself too seriously with a OMG I HAT YOU ALL EMO ANGSt post. This is a great parody.

wait - where did u get that the libertarians like the enviornment - wth? They're further right wing than the Republicans.

waitasecond - libertarian - LaRouche! OMG he brainwashes people into saying that, i've actually done research on him - he ran for president while in jail - its kinda scary what he does, hes tried for prez every time since G HW Bush.

Okay,even though i am privvy to the deadly secret of this fan fiction of disaster...you are so killing me...yet like an auto accident,I find I can not turn away until it will become too late.
Like Slade I say to thee..."What the...?"

I am giving a second review because I believe I was too harsh and it was too much like a flame. I do not hate this story, but I don't think it that great and I believe you could do better if you wanted. I do realize this is a parody, but I fail to see the humor. I am sorry for being harsh.

OH, SATIRE! You're cruel.

“Sieg Saffron Terrorists,” Slade said evilly.

“I'm Russian-ish!” Terra bounced in her seat. “Is that close to German?”

“Terra just sit there and look pretty please.”

Hehe. Don't worry, babe. I get it. This is amazing and so hysterical. Expect my full review at TGN soon. I seriously think you've found your stride with humor--the last two chapters were fantastic and you're really mastering the biting subtlety that's so necessary for satire (yes, guys--satire).

Looking forward to more "ZOMG GUD CHAPPIES LOLZ"!

-Azelma :)