Great story please continue it. Carson's POV would be really good.

Wow! Great story! Loving the Shepard whumpage! Can't wait to read more, so please update soon! LOL!

Ooh, I like this! The poor boys! Don't know which of them has it the worst here. (Well, okay ... Sheppard, probably, but McKay's got all that guilt to deal with, so I wouldn't want to be him, either!) But the cavalry is here, so things will be all right. We hope.

Loved the Rodney comment about Sheppard wearing the sunglasses to look "all piloty", and loved Sheppard looking up at McKay while telling him that he was glad it hadn't been him ... aw.

Yes!! Another wonderful chapter. Now Carson's POV would be great... and then Elizabeth's. ;)
Keep writing, this story is great.

totally cool ! now do we get an infirmary chapter hehe?
Begging worked last time!

Oh I'm so glad you decided to continue this story cos I loved the one shot you posted - and the second chapter is equally as good! Lovely characterisation once again and the action is well-written and tension-filled. I love it. I look forward to more.

Hey, you can't stop there. Please tell me, you're planning a Carson OPV from where this one left off?

I love it!

Excellent job of expressing both POV's very nicely, and of course with some Shep-whump thrown in you can't go wrong. Do you plan any more of this story? I hope so but if not, nice work.

Kitty

Gee, you can't stop here! A couple of more chapters, please. Love Shep whump and Rodney angst over Shep whump!

I love this! Really lovely to read both pov's here.
I really hope you'll write an epilogue to this? Please!

Oh, nononononono. Not the end. Definitely not the end. You sit down right now and do the right thing for your readers. Chapter 2, 3, 4 or more right now. That's right, ok- breathing again. Panicking slowing down. Ah

Tasty h/c snack. Thanks!

gah! not the end! how did he get shot!? What happened when he got back! GAH!

Great interaction between Sheppard and McKay - love the friendship! Are you sure this is the end - such harsh words. I bet you could squeak out another chapter if you tried. I know, it's your story - I just wasn't ready for it to be over yet (that's a compliment, by the way).

Ok, I'm on bended knee, have serious chocolate to throw at you, and am very happy to beg...

There just has to be a before, and an after for this? - you just can't leave it here? - please?

Very very cool chapter, I can't believe how superb your writing is? - you just get better and better every story. I know that sounds like I'm saying what you wrote before wasn't good, its' not that at all, it's just that you amaze me every single time and lift the bar as you go.

Really you are pleasure to read.