Wow... why doesn't this have more reviews? This is easily the most IC Sephiroth (pre-Nibelheim) I've read on this entire site. *applauds you*

This is interesting. I'm wondering what will happen next. I like your style of writing. My only qualm is how often you describe Sephiroth's appearance; the frequent mentions of his hair and eye color are a little distracting. You really only need to say it once. Good job otherwise. I enjoy reading introspection because Sephiroth is such a complex character, and it's hard to find fiction that takes place before he went insane. I think the title is very appropriate.

There wasn't really much happening in this fic, but still it was good! The bitterness and coldness inside Sephiroth is there all the way through the text, and then the story really has something, I'll admit that.